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Violette Contest - Odd Thoughts

hear the happy skittle 
knows he isn't brittle
laughs at flying spittal 
from the vicars

see the sullen dancer
living fearing cancer
seldom wants an answer
always bickers

smell the Christmas fairy
legs and arms so hairy
makes me rather wary
nostril pickers

man who's always smiling
messing up the tiling
says he's done the filing
wearing knickers

thinks he's Jack the Ripper
breaks another zipper
eats a mouldy kipper
pounding tickers

LOL, pure nonsense but wanted to try this interesting form

written 31st March
for Mick's Violette contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 4/16/2018 12:13:00 AM
Wonderful Violette, my friend, and a most deserving win - enjoyed this thoroughly! :-)
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Date: 4/15/2018 6:41:00 PM
I love it, especially the Xmas fairy and vicars. Congrats. That was a fun form, wasn't it? The difficulty was coming up with feminine rhymes.
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Date: 4/15/2018 4:29:00 PM
As far as I'm concerned, its one of the best. lol. Elaine
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Date: 4/15/2018 1:38:00 PM
dropping back with my congrats Jack this is so so funny:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 4/15/2018 12:46:00 PM
Congrats on your top win, Jack. Well done - you aced it.
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Date: 4/15/2018 8:38:00 AM
Congratulations on your great win. Jack.
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Date: 4/15/2018 8:30:00 AM
Hi Jack, Many thanks for taking up the challenge with this relatively new form. Critique: 100% perfect! A beautiful, fun Violette! Congratulations on your 1st place, many thanks for your support... Mick
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Date: 4/13/2018 6:51:00 PM
You have some very humorous images in this violette, Jack. Hope I never run into that "hairy fairy." LOL Best wishes in the contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/12/2018 9:36:00 AM
Love your pure nonsense jack, it makes sense to me...
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Date: 4/1/2018 7:28:00 AM
Has good flow and a lot of nonsense or is it? Reads like a good contender. Way to go. Sara...
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Date: 4/1/2018 7:13:00 AM
Lovely nonsense. A pleasant read this morning, Jack.
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Date: 3/31/2018 4:34:00 PM
HA. it truly is even more interesting with YOUR spin on it, this form, Jack. I love how you did it!!
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Date: 3/31/2018 4:20:00 PM
You say pure nonsense...I say witty and entertaining, Jack:) ~ Wishing you a Happy Easter, my friend. Regards // paul
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Date: 3/31/2018 3:43:00 PM
some great humourous lines Jack!:-) hugs Jan xx
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