Violet Garden


Violet softness blushes the cheeks of the gently swaying purple vinca, and murmurs sweetly of 
Violet cloud filled breezes caressing their green leaves, like
Violet lips that whisper the bitter longing flavor of deep blue love songs when snow arrives.
Violet ice tinged coleus shiver beneath the white covering of blinding cold as
Violet perfumed roses reserve their fragrant blooms under the silvery veil of winter.

(purple, murmurs, caressing, green, flavor, blue, white, blinding, fragrant, silvery)
I walk through the garden in early Spring. The purple, fragrant earth murmurs with each step of my blue and white shoes caressing their moistened soles. Green leaves and silvery sun flavor the scene in blinding light, that paints the blossoms mauve.
10/12/15 James Inman

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 11/14/2015 10:02:00 PM
Wow! I love how you created this piece James. I am so happy to see it high up on the winner's list. Bravo!
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Date: 11/15/2015 6:33:00 AM
Thanks so much Connie.
Date: 11/12/2015 2:06:00 PM
I really enjoyed this James, it was both a lovely poem and great visually - the flow worked well from start to finish! Well done and congrats, Laura.
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Date: 11/12/2015 2:52:00 PM
Laura, thank you so much for the lovely comment.
Date: 11/12/2015 6:47:00 AM
I like how you did yours James. Congratulations.
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James Inman
Date: 11/12/2015 8:29:00 AM
Thanks Richard.
Date: 11/11/2015 4:40:00 PM
Congratulations in your win. Excellent poem James.
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James Inman
Date: 11/12/2015 8:22:00 AM
Thanks, Nayda. Glad you liked it.
Date: 11/11/2015 2:26:00 PM
Your warm color dances upon the winners' list..Congrats!!! Sara
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Date: 11/12/2015 8:20:00 AM
Thank you Sara.
Date: 11/11/2015 11:34:00 AM
Dropping back with my congrats James:-) hugs Jan xx
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James Inman
Date: 11/12/2015 8:19:00 AM
Thanks Jan, catching up on comments.
Date: 11/11/2015 9:46:00 AM
Violet, everything. James, Love the smell, Congratulations on your win. SKAT
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James Inman
Date: 11/11/2015 1:03:00 PM
No idea what I was trying to say here, in case you're wondering.
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Date: 11/11/2015 10:10:00 AM
Lol, SKAT, thanks and it was my odoriferous, periwinkle pleasure presenting it.
Date: 11/11/2015 9:03:00 AM
You've created a beautiful garden, James. Congratulations.
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James Inman
Date: 11/11/2015 10:08:00 AM
Thanks Lin.
Date: 11/11/2015 8:02:00 AM
Congrats on your win James! I loved the colors you used and the story at the end. Thank you for entering into my contest that was difficult.
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James Inman
Date: 11/11/2015 8:19:00 AM
Tammy, thank you for hosting it. A very challenging write. I had to tweak the Etheree several times after I posted it to get it where I wanted it. Thank you again.
Date: 11/3/2015 12:01:00 PM
Creative work to go with this contest entry..Reads like a winner to me..Way to go..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 11/3/2015 12:45:00 PM
Thank you Sara. I don't usually change my poems after there written but the bottom poem has had several minor revisions that I have made since I posted it.
Date: 10/13/2015 4:35:00 PM
What a lovely entry James. I love how you presented your entry and I especially love the first part. Good luck in the contest! #7
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James Inman
Date: 10/18/2015 12:08:00 AM
Connie, thanks for your nice comment. Sorry for the late reply.
Date: 10/13/2015 2:27:00 PM
James, wow how creative and interesting, I love it 7, I want to try this challenge also, and thanks for visiting my poem, wild heart ...
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Date: 10/18/2015 12:07:00 AM
BW, I can't seem to get caught up with replies to comments, but thanks for your sweet one. I'm not sure if I have completed it correctly or not.
Date: 10/12/2015 4:56:00 PM
Dear James Thank you for your comment, and I agree with you, on your thoughts one never knows, whom you may pass on the streets, and ever human being has evil within them, great poem above love love the romance within your verses simply wonderful my dear fellow, cheri I'd love to chat with you more but i am watching a special right now, and it is yeilding interesting information another time though for sure, cheri
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James Inman
Date: 10/18/2015 12:00:00 AM
Hi! Thanks so much for your visit and nice comment.
Date: 10/12/2015 3:58:00 PM
goes well with my violet creams! i'm falling ever more in love with your writing, that first one in particular is sublime...can't get my head around this form at all, i have a mental block! lol
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Date: 10/17/2015 11:58:00 PM
Charlotte, hi! I agree, lovely poem you wrote, sorry I haven't had a chance to leave a comment on it. I actually thought I had until I reread it tonight. Got to catch up on the Andaree contest. I agree the second one wasn't as good so I've done a minor re-write on it. Thank you sooo much for the incredibly flattering comment!!
Date: 10/12/2015 3:48:00 PM
wow James we sure have been set a challenge and I have no idea where to start - a fabulous take on the colour theme - good luck:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/17/2015 11:48:00 PM
Hi, Jan. As always thanks for the nice comment. Haven't replied to comments on this one earlier because I thought the second poem was weak. I have tweaked it slightly and hopefully it reads better now.
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