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Vines in Winter

Passionflowers winter-wilted and passionless, twining around the treillage of a wintry world, winter-weakened, flower-frail in the ice-vice of cold's hold. Ice-ivy creeping and strangling; a crunching and grinding like sharded glass beneath boots, around roots, an unearthing, uprooting, a tugging, unaware of track marks vine-twining winter-pale arms. Every street corner a trellis or snare, stems/limbs overexposed and bare, petals loveless, neglected and crushed, long since fallen and gone. Plucked/f****d fallen flowers, dropped and discarded. Polar touches on skin stamen-thin, clematis-veined stems bending and breaking, lifelines buried beneath snow-weighted winter. Blizzards tearing off tendrils one by one. The groped now groping, hankering for anchoring, fruitlessly reaching to cling to a trellis of care, to wind around whatever support they find, the little that's there. A frigid fondling and fingering, gelid entwining and fusing, naked and numb flowers forced open before or after their time. A scarlet staining, seeping of sepals, a bedding and shedding, a shaming. Moonseeded moans on glacial winds, aching and echoing, emptied into the emptiness of one more indifferent morning, rejected, discarded, no stems/arms strong enough to hold the cold at bay, or keep the frost-frail flowers intact as they fall in a secret and silent shattering.

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Date: 3/6/2025 1:20:00 PM
flower-frail in the ice-vice of cold's hold…I feel the vice in this image-packed emotive angst of a write! Great metaphor…haunting! Great work, Charlotte - you bring your heart to your work’s catharsis.
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Date: 3/6/2025 11:00:00 AM
Hmm.' Well?? I advise not to dwell.' In cold frigid Street corners.' Where shattering shards.' Do to Much chattering? Its like this.? Hmm everyone is different Charlotte.' Not that you are unaware.' And those holloeed out mornings.? When the indifference is an overwhelming presence.' Whuch no ammount of furnishings or objects Can erase.' I advise hmm?? Look I am here any Time i thought to comment being as I sm'd you.' All the best.'
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Date: 3/4/2025 2:55:00 AM
powerful write dear poet. congratulations on your win. cheers!!!
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Date: 3/4/2025 1:38:00 AM
A wonderful descriptive poem I enjoyed every line, congratulations
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Date: 3/3/2025 7:18:00 AM
Your theme of abuse once again creeps subtly through as beaten, withering vines reaching out for whatever support might still be found provides a heartbreaking metaphor. All I can say is there is love in this world Charlotte. I hope you have managed to find some and it brings you a measure of comfort
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Date: 2/22/2025 11:15:00 AM
Clawing for a life, raw, exposed...doubting but persistent. Success in the balance...teetering...reader shocked and sad. =;o/
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Date: 2/21/2025 5:50:00 PM
AMAZING how do I spell it out? What raw use of language, could feel it...every line is masterful at describing the winter vines...new ways, thanks <3
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