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~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ dusk stealing the last light a villainous thief

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Joe Maverick

Date: 3/24/2024 7:06:00 AM

A vermillion and villainous vicariously veritably Viable visable...Oh I'll just take it 'as read' Sara.!

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/24/2024 6:18:00 PM

Clever and witty comments, Joe. Thanks for stopping by :-) have a wonderful evening, Sara

Silent One

Date: 3/22/2024 1:23:00 PM

Amazing imagery and great one liner..

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/22/2024 6:02:00 PM

thank you, Silent One. Appreciate your visit and comments, Sara

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/22/2024 12:59:00 PM

Look forward to the day when we have permanent light. Of course not in this life. Tom

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/22/2024 6:03:00 PM

ooo, I like the way you think...permanent light...that will be grand, won't it. Have a pleasant weekend, Sara

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 3/22/2024 11:01:00 AM

And he does it every day. I don't think he'll get caught. This was an enjoyable poem of a planet in rotation.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/22/2024 6:02:00 PM

liked your humorous comment. I'm glad he doesn't get caught :-) Have a great evening. Sara

Robert Sidwell

Date: 3/22/2024 9:56:00 AM

This really is creative and brilliant. I’m sure I’m not the only one to wish I’d come up with it!

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/22/2024 6:01:00 PM

you're most kind, Robert. Grateful you found my poem creative and brilliant...wonderful comments to give a fellow poet. Have a pleasant weekend, Sara

Kelli White

Date: 3/22/2024 9:08:00 AM

Didn’t know what to expect but a brilliant poetic piece, Kelli

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/22/2024 6:01:00 PM

thank you, Kelli, for stopping by and for commenting. Grateful you found my poem 'brilliant.' Have a pleasant weekend, Sara

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/22/2024 5:38:00 AM

Creative lines, Sara B. Way to go. If for a contest, it reads like a winner to me. Way to go. Sara K

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/22/2024 6:00:00 PM

ahh, thanks Sara B, for your visit and comments. Glad you think it's a winner. Wishing you a blessed evening, Sara

Ink Empress

Date: 3/22/2024 5:08:00 AM

What a deep and gorgeous saraku. I love this how you’ve written about dusk stealing the last light: ah definitely a villainous thief , leaving us wandering through darkness, searching for stars in silence. Pleasure reading always your work. Sending you light

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/22/2024 6:00:00 PM

thank you, Ink, for your kind and lovely comments. Grateful you enjoyed this rather 'unique' Monoku...Wishing you a wonderful weekend ahead, hugs, Sara

John Lawless

Date: 3/22/2024 3:38:00 AM

Ah, but what lurks in the darkness Sara...nice little bit of intrigue herein

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/22/2024 3:53:00 AM

Sun sets and the nightly intrigue begins :-) I appreciate your visit today. Enjoy your Friday, Sara

Valsa George

Date: 3/21/2024 10:25:00 PM

A powerful monoku, dear Sara !

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/22/2024 3:53:00 AM

thanks, Valsa. I appreciate your visit. hugs, Sara

Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/21/2024 8:43:00 PM

Interesting perception... Certainly dusks steals away with the day. Kudos, Gershon

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/22/2024 3:53:00 AM

thanks for your visit, Gershon, and for the kudos. Have a splendid day, Sara

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/22/2024 3:52:00 AM

thanks for your visit, Gershon, and for the kudos. Have a splendid day, Sara

Paige Hind

Date: 3/21/2024 8:01:00 PM

That's a way to look at it. Powerful.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/22/2024 3:52:00 AM

thanks, Paige....not my typical write. But as I watched the sunset the other night, I felt twinges of sadness as darkness took away the light (although temporary)...hence the writing of this poem...Have a lovely day, Sara

Jerry Brotherton

Date: 3/21/2024 6:37:00 PM

A fantastic monoku, my friend.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/22/2024 3:50:00 AM

thanks, Jerry. I appreciate you and your visits. Enjoy your day, Sara