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Vignette-Florence Pieta

They took Him down from the cross, Joseph,both Mary's,mourned their loss, From any angle,it was 'finished'- In dead marble,the moment preserved, Yet by living power,in Him, we're cured. Inspired by Raul's photos of the Deposition

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Audrey Haick

Date: 12/21/2009 8:46:00 AM

Great job, Brian! Congratulations on your win in the contest! Peace and love to you! Audrey

Elaine George

Date: 12/19/2009 10:34:00 AM

Dear Brian, Very moving Vignette. Congratulations on your well deserved win. Lainie

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 12/19/2009 8:24:00 AM

Congrats on your success in Raul's contest, Brian. Merry Christmas, Caroline.

Carrie Richards

Date: 12/19/2009 7:37:00 AM

Simply said, and such a fine depiction of this inspiring piece of art...you have the ability to speak in fewer words...and say it so beautifully! Congratulations Brian, and thank you so much for your constant support all through the year! I am inspired by your words. Merry Christmas! ~ Love, Carrie

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/19/2009 7:08:00 AM

Congrats Brian on your winning poem in Raul's contest.. well deserved win for an excellent entry... and thankxxx for your wonderful comments on my poetry always... blessings... luv... Linda-Marie..

James Fraser

Date: 12/19/2009 4:55:00 AM

Many congratulations on your win in Raul's fine contest Brian, Merry Christmas >> James

Raul Moreno

Date: 12/19/2009 3:03:00 AM

Brian, congrats on your success in my contest...Raul

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 12/11/2009 7:17:00 AM

This is just beautiful and very moving--I especially liked your 3rd & 4th lines...best of luck in the contest, Brian--I'm sure this will do wonderfully in Raul's contest :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/3/2009 3:28:00 AM

Like the contrast of preserved in marble but cured by living power. Keep the magical pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by my poems and commenting. Sara

Elaine George

Date: 12/2/2009 11:54:00 PM

This actually made my heart lurch. Very powerful ekphrasis, Brian. Best wishes in Raul's contest. Lainie

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/2/2009 7:42:00 PM

Magnificent vignette Brian and good luck in Raul's new contest.. such passionate words and this new form of poetry intrigues me... powerful poem... blessings... luv... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"

Carrie Richards

Date: 12/2/2009 6:01:00 PM

Powerful and beautifully written. Good luck in Raul's contest, Brian, with this wonderful ekphrasis. Carrie

Raul Moreno

Date: 12/2/2009 10:51:00 AM

Brian, thanks for supporting my contest...Raul