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Vigil

...inspired by 'Inside And Outside' by Allen Tate As moonbeams settle softly on her face, lay bare the gaunt and haggard visage there, a woman whose whole life was spent in care for those who ran and won another race. Those stippled hands, the measure of her grace, her shriveled arms, now wasting in despair, her saddened eyes so sorrowful and spare, a broken soul who could not keep apace. Wilting now, her lissom body gone, wishing there were something left to say, countenance once sparkling, now wan, as she prepares to make that final trip to glory, to the everlasting day when pain no longer whispers from her lips. Those who stand in grief can only wait and ponder just what might have been, but death is drawing nigh, it's much too late, her appearance now so sallow and so lean. Thoughts turn to their own brief mortalities, as they reflect on how they will atone, and justify their improprieties. We cannot cheat the Reaper, foil his plan, and live a life of immortality, His grip is irresistible, and none can bypass destiny, its fickle charms, so may she sleep in peace, in purity, and rest forever in His loving arms.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/24/2012 7:44:00 PM
Makes me wonder where the inspiration for this came from. It certainly is full of the sadness of a life ending after the loneliness of old age has set in. The story is told with such interesting descriptions.
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Date: 7/9/2009 12:04:00 PM
Such a beautiful tribute... I love the last three stanzas SO much. Thank you for sharing Keith.
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Date: 7/8/2009 10:53:00 AM
Keith, this is such a sad matter of which you have written today. But you have made it seem so peaceful and painless at the end. This was a very moving poem my friend. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/8/2009 10:46:00 AM
some wonderful phrases here Keith. I love this piece and its going in my favs. Bg
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