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Thin eyelids seal 
                  the window to his soul. 
 His cheeks are collapsed, 
                  though once very full. 
 Make-up covers them, 
                  thick like paint. 
 He looks so 
                sick, 
                      breathless, 
           faint. 
 Once smiling lips wrinkle down 
                  without tone. 
 His once strong body's 
                  skin and bone. 
 He's continually still, 
                  without flowing air. 
 Wake up, sleeper, 
                 if 
                       you're 
            there! 
 Who's this imposter 
                  in this fancy box? 
 Where is the dad 
                  that I suddenly lost?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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A  Avatar
March 14, 2014 at 2:01 AM
Juliet, lovely win...Skat
Johnson Avatar
March 13, 2014 at 5:58 PM
It is hard to believe they are really gone. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
Onclaud Avatar
March 13, 2014 at 12:54 PM
wonderfully tearful, jukiet.. congrats!.. huggs
Horsch Avatar
March 13, 2014 at 11:11 AM
Your poem brought tears to my eyes Juliet, Congrats on a wonderful win. Your Dad would be proud.......Hugs......Roger
Mehta Avatar
March 13, 2014 at 5:03 AM
Enjoyed the emotional write and congrats on the fine win, juliet
Gasun Avatar
March 13, 2014 at 2:49 AM
Congratulations my dear friend Juliet . Thank you so much for your full support! Biggest hugs! Love lots, Leonora
A  Avatar
January 31, 2014 at 9:29 AM
JULIET, :) thanks you for the wonderful winning poem. Enjoy your day. Love ~ SKAT~
Ligon Avatar
January 31, 2014 at 4:56 PM
Thank you much, SKAT! You have a great day, too!
Flannery Avatar
January 24, 2014 at 2:17 PM
So sad but often true. Heart breaking! God Bless.
Ligon Avatar
January 31, 2014 at 4:59 PM
Thanks, Vincent.
Guzzi Avatar
January 19, 2014 at 7:35 PM
so very sad, I don't even want to imagine, I guess we all have our turns going through this, BUG HUGS, thank you for the kindness of leaving a comment on my verse. Light & Love
Ligon Avatar
January 31, 2014 at 4:58 PM
Thanks, Debbie.
Dietrich Avatar
January 15, 2014 at 6:31 PM
Also, Well done!
Ligon Avatar
January 31, 2014 at 4:58 PM
Thanks for the comments. : )
Dietrich Avatar
January 15, 2014 at 6:30 PM
this is very sad. I know the feeling though. When my stepdad and also my grandpa were in the "box", it was surreal because they just looked so "gone" from their bodies!
Ligon Avatar
January 31, 2014 at 4:58 PM
Awww. Yeah, stange, huh?
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