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Thin eyelids seal the window to his soul. His cheeks are collapsed, though once very full. Make-up covers them, thick like paint. He looks so sick, breathless, faint. Once smiling lips wrinkle down without tone. His once strong body's skin and bone. He's continually still, without flowing air. Wake up, sleeper, if you're there! Who's this imposter in this fancy box? Where is the dad that I suddenly lost?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 3/14/2014 2:01:00 AM
Juliet, lovely win...Skat
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Date: 3/13/2014 5:58:00 PM
It is hard to believe they are really gone. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 3/13/2014 12:54:00 PM
wonderfully tearful, jukiet.. congrats!.. huggs
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Date: 3/13/2014 11:11:00 AM
Your poem brought tears to my eyes Juliet, Congrats on a wonderful win. Your Dad would be proud.......Hugs......Roger
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Date: 3/13/2014 5:03:00 AM
Enjoyed the emotional write and congrats on the fine win, juliet
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Date: 3/13/2014 2:49:00 AM
Congratulations my dear friend Juliet . Thank you so much for your full support! Biggest hugs! Love lots, Leonora
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Date: 1/31/2014 9:29:00 AM
JULIET, :) thanks you for the wonderful winning poem. Enjoy your day. Love ~ SKAT~
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Juliet Ligon
Date: 1/31/2014 4:56:00 PM
Thank you much, SKAT! You have a great day, too!
Date: 1/24/2014 2:17:00 PM
So sad but often true. Heart breaking! God Bless.
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Juliet Ligon
Date: 1/31/2014 4:59:00 PM
Thanks, Vincent.
Date: 1/19/2014 7:35:00 PM
so very sad, I don't even want to imagine, I guess we all have our turns going through this, BUG HUGS, thank you for the kindness of leaving a comment on my verse. Light & Love
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Juliet Ligon
Date: 1/31/2014 4:58:00 PM
Thanks, Debbie.
Date: 1/15/2014 6:31:00 PM
Also, Well done!
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Juliet Ligon
Date: 1/31/2014 4:58:00 PM
Thanks for the comments. : )
Date: 1/15/2014 6:30:00 PM
this is very sad. I know the feeling though. When my stepdad and also my grandpa were in the "box", it was surreal because they just looked so "gone" from their bodies!
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Juliet Ligon
Date: 1/31/2014 4:58:00 PM
Awww. Yeah, stange, huh?

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