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Victoria

Victoria, so long away, The streets of London, Still today, Remember how, the dimmer sun, Is brighter by the day. And though your plight, Was dark ahead, The stars at night, Above your bed, Were lullabies of light. The stories that you told so well, Became for me, The dinner bell, That happily, Grew kinder with each tell. The city boy, named Oliver, The one you freed, And loved, for sure, Became the need, That finally won the cure. The child whom we still adore, The very one, That Mary bore, Was never done, By how you loved us more. The victory, from certain hate, Became the fight, We celebrate, To win the right, And thus, to prove our fate.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 7/18/2020 2:19:00 AM
Ah, so beautifully penned. Wow! Bravo. Congratulations also.
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Bryan Norton
Date: 7/18/2020 7:37:00 PM
Caren, so good to hear from you, and receive your kindly words. "Dear pensive one, your kindly write Befits my day, my appetite For something witty, warm, and bright To shine the gift you gave tonight."
Date: 7/14/2020 1:55:00 PM
Loved your heartwarming muse Bryan. This is such a soothing tale. Congratulations on your win :)
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Bryan Norton
Date: 7/18/2020 7:58:00 PM
Thank you, dear, but should I fail, to tell a more compelling tale, do not refuse, my better muse, should I regain my graceful hues.
Date: 7/13/2020 9:44:00 PM
You have written with such depth and emotion, Bryan along with vibrant images. Congratulations on your win!
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Bryan Norton
Date: 7/14/2020 12:06:00 AM
Thank you, Sam.
Date: 7/11/2020 2:16:00 PM
Wow, Bryan, what great writing. Congrats on your win. You are golden here!!
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Bryan Norton
Date: 7/14/2020 12:04:00 AM
Thank you. Glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 7/10/2020 11:09:00 PM
Some great writing, Bryan. I love your rhyme scheme, and the lines "The stars at night, Above your bed, Were lullabies of light". Congrats for your win ~ John
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Bryan Norton
Date: 7/11/2020 5:38:00 AM
Thank you, John. I appreciate your comments. Have a good night.
Date: 7/10/2020 7:13:00 PM
Congrats on your top win!;)
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Bryan Norton
Date: 7/11/2020 5:39:00 AM
Thank you, Brenda. I look forward to reading your poems. Take care.
Date: 7/10/2020 9:42:00 AM
Wonderfully penned Bryan. Congrats on your win.
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Bryan Norton
Date: 7/10/2020 1:40:00 PM
Thank you Jeanne. Hopefully I can get to your poems this weekend. I am really looking forward to it. Best wishes, Bryan.

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