Victor Tries Again

All I can be if it’s left up to me
Is a brain in a tank full of bubbles
Can’t hear it, can’t see it, I only can be it, 
And that’s just the start of my troubles

It was no disease that killed most of me
But a brain catcher down at the docks
Now, my one sensation, a dull static hum
And occasional electric shocks

I think I recall being near six feet tall
A man who could see, smell and hear 
I could feel hot and cold and I thought I’d grow old
With only arthritis to fear

As a brain, I’m estranged from my mortal remains
I know that this dark is a sham
I cannot see light in the day or the night
But I think… and that means that I am

With stimuli lacking, my sanity cracking
When will my mad captor devise
A restructured me, so that I can see
Through some poor soul’s extracted eyes


                                   ***

At last, there is light, goodbye to my night
Will I frighten or will I delight
I know how this goes for history shows
Should you see me then you shall take flight

Through this hocus pocus, I cannot yet focus
Is that the doc’s form lurking there?
I once read the book and however I look
I’m gonna give people a scare

My vision is clearing and so is my hearing
I see I have rather nice hands
And I have a soft voice… did the doc make a choice
For my voice doesn’t sound like a man’s

“It lives,” the doc cries with his beast by his side
Did the monster manoeuvre the knife
It stomps to my side with its arms open wide
I think I’m the bloody thing’s ‘wife’

But his nightmarish fun has barely begun
As I had it away on my toes
But he’ll have his fun because I cannot run…
In stilettos and pantyhose
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Wolf Avatar
March 8, 2025 at 7:43 PM
What a wild, wacky, weird, wonderful ride on the wave of Terry Flood's brain! Bravo! :) gw
Goldsmith Avatar
March 7, 2025 at 11:26 AM
I enjoyed reading your creative write. What imagination and humor you have here. Thanks for the laugh. Have a fun weekend as you write away...............
Bauer Avatar
March 7, 2025 at 10:43 AM
Ha! A big welcome back to your comic muse, Terry! This is brilliant and, although I was expecting a humorous ending, you’ve outdone yourself here…
Flood Avatar
March 7, 2025 at 11:17 AM
Thanks, Ilene. I have to say that this felt a little like old times, when ideas would just pop into my head. Here’s hoping there’ll be a lot more like that. Glad you enjoyed. Terry
Miller Avatar
March 7, 2025 at 8:37 AM
This is epic and so, so funny i really did LOL
Flood Avatar
March 7, 2025 at 11:09 AM
Thanks, Terry. Glad to give you a laugh. Terry
M  Avatar
March 7, 2025 at 7:49 AM
Wow that's quite a poem Terry....brilliantly written with great imagination and of course with your trademark humour and last liner...love it! Debx
Flood Avatar
March 7, 2025 at 11:07 AM
Please don’t ask where the notion of a brain in a ‘box’ came from. I can’t say I even sat and thought about it. It was just ‘There’. Which must mean something ;-)
Foster Avatar
March 7, 2025 at 6:53 AM
Very entertaining,Terry I enjoyed reading. Loved the content and the flowing rhythm of this tall tale. Cheers
Flood Avatar
March 7, 2025 at 11:02 AM
Thanks, Margaret. My previous poem was about exploding Jello and now this one begins with my own brain in a bubbling tank…. I wonder if I might need checking over ;-)
Lane Avatar
March 7, 2025 at 5:31 AM
LOL Terry. I just read Tom's comment, and I think there's no hope to get away from Dr. Frankenstein's new monster! Your writing is as crazy good as your imagination.
Lane Avatar
March 7, 2025 at 2:38 PM
When something comes to mind, especially if it makes you giggle or smile... you'd better write it.
Flood Avatar
March 7, 2025 at 10:55 AM
Thanks, Lin. I can, hand on heart, say that the Stilettos and pantyhose line hadn’t occurred to me until moments before I wrote it. It gave me enough of a giggle that it just had to be the ending ;-)
Cunningham Avatar
March 7, 2025 at 5:07 AM
Lol, there's no hope, next. Enjoy your weekend Terry. Tom
Cunningham Avatar
March 7, 2025 at 12:43 PM
What you get up to behind closed doors is your business lol
Flood Avatar
March 7, 2025 at 10:57 AM
Thanks, Tom. You do understand that I don’t wear Stilettos and pantyhose… even at weekends!
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