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Victor Tries Again

All I can be if it’s left up to me Is a brain in a tank full of bubbles Can’t hear it, can’t see it, I only can be it, And that’s just the start of my troubles It was no disease that killed most of me But a brain catcher down at the docks Now, my one sensation, a dull static hum And occasional electric shocks I think I recall being near six feet tall A man who could see, smell and hear I could feel hot and cold and I thought I’d grow old With only arthritis to fear As a brain, I’m estranged from my mortal remains I know that this dark is a sham I cannot see light in the day or the night But I think… and that means that I am With stimuli lacking, my sanity cracking When will my mad captor devise A restructured me, so that I can see Through some poor soul’s extracted eyes *** At last, there is light, goodbye to my night Will I frighten or will I delight I know how this goes for history shows Should you see me then you shall take flight Through this hocus pocus, I cannot yet focus Is that the doc’s form lurking there? I once read the book and however I look I’m gonna give people a scare My vision is clearing and so is my hearing I see I have rather nice hands And I have a soft voice… did the doc make a choice For my voice doesn’t sound like a man’s “It lives,” the doc cries with his beast by his side Did the monster manoeuvre the knife It stomps to my side with its arms open wide I think I’m the bloody thing’s ‘wife’ But his nightmarish fun has barely begun As I had it away on my toes But he’ll have his fun because I cannot run… In stilettos and pantyhose

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025




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Date: 3/8/2025 7:43:00 PM
What a wild, wacky, weird, wonderful ride on the wave of Terry Flood's brain! Bravo! :) gw
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Date: 3/7/2025 11:26:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your creative write. What imagination and humor you have here. Thanks for the laugh. Have a fun weekend as you write away...............
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Date: 3/7/2025 10:43:00 AM
Ha! A big welcome back to your comic muse, Terry! This is brilliant and, although I was expecting a humorous ending, you’ve outdone yourself here…
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Terry Flood
Date: 3/7/2025 11:17:00 AM
Thanks, Ilene. I have to say that this felt a little like old times, when ideas would just pop into my head. Here’s hoping there’ll be a lot more like that. Glad you enjoyed. Terry
Date: 3/7/2025 8:37:00 AM
This is epic and so, so funny i really did LOL
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Terry Flood
Date: 3/7/2025 11:09:00 AM
Thanks, Terry. Glad to give you a laugh. Terry
Date: 3/7/2025 7:49:00 AM
Wow that's quite a poem Terry....brilliantly written with great imagination and of course with your trademark humour and last liner...love it! Debx
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Terry Flood
Date: 3/7/2025 11:07:00 AM
Please don’t ask where the notion of a brain in a ‘box’ came from. I can’t say I even sat and thought about it. It was just ‘There’. Which must mean something ;-)
Date: 3/7/2025 6:53:00 AM
Very entertaining,Terry I enjoyed reading. Loved the content and the flowing rhythm of this tall tale. Cheers
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Terry Flood
Date: 3/7/2025 11:02:00 AM
Thanks, Margaret. My previous poem was about exploding Jello and now this one begins with my own brain in a bubbling tank…. I wonder if I might need checking over ;-)
Date: 3/7/2025 5:31:00 AM
LOL Terry. I just read Tom's comment, and I think there's no hope to get away from Dr. Frankenstein's new monster! Your writing is as crazy good as your imagination.
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Lin Lane
Date: 3/7/2025 2:38:00 PM
When something comes to mind, especially if it makes you giggle or smile... you'd better write it.
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Terry Flood
Date: 3/7/2025 10:55:00 AM
Thanks, Lin. I can, hand on heart, say that the Stilettos and pantyhose line hadn’t occurred to me until moments before I wrote it. It gave me enough of a giggle that it just had to be the ending ;-)
Date: 3/7/2025 5:07:00 AM
Lol, there's no hope, next. Enjoy your weekend Terry. Tom
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 3/7/2025 12:43:00 PM
What you get up to behind closed doors is your business lol
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Terry Flood
Date: 3/7/2025 10:57:00 AM
Thanks, Tom. You do understand that I don’t wear Stilettos and pantyhose… even at weekends!

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