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Victor

citrus sun with lancers beaming above eastern hills, vanquishing gloom

May 29, 2022

Syllable count : 17 
Morning Monoku Contest
Sponsor - Michelle Faulkner

Copyright © Valsa George | Year Posted 2022

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June 2, 2022 at 10:49 PM

This is a breathtaking monoku!! Stunning imagery! Blessings dear friend and congratulations on your win!

Andrea Dietrich

June 2, 2022 at 7:48 PM

what a beauty!!

June 1, 2022 at 12:38 PM

Congrats Sis Valsa. I like Muchelkes poetry also, as among the best on PS. Shalom shalom

Paula Goldsmith

June 1, 2022 at 7:46 AM

Congratulations on your win. A pretty write and picture. Have a blessed day...............

June 1, 2022 at 12:18 AM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this picturesque monoku. God bless you.

May 31, 2022 at 10:50 PM

Such an artistic and soul-rousing way to describe the victory of dawn over gloom. Love your title too. Congrats, Valsa

Brian Sambourne

May 31, 2022 at 9:50 PM

A true winner! Such a strong image of morning sun lanching the landscape. Congratulations! Brian

May 31, 2022 at 2:07 PM

Congratulations for your win Valsa :)

Michelle Faulkner

May 31, 2022 at 2:04 PM

You caught the hopeful feeling of dawn so perfectly, Valsa, thank you for entering my contest, and congratulations!

May 31, 2022 at 8:16 AM

Lovely match with photo, welcoming Monoku, Valsa. Have a great week! Bill

May 31, 2022 at 8:01 AM

A morning to remember, I hope the spell works! Victor deserves to be happy. Very nice Valsa.

Victor Buhagiar

May 29, 2022 at 11:09 PM

You cannot refer to me. Must be someone else. I am always gloomy these days.

May 30, 2022 at 8:32 PM

Be back to cheer Victor.... ! May God bring you joy !

Andrea Dietrich

May 29, 2022 at 10:27 AM

GREAT imagery AND message both. A winning combination

May 29, 2022 at 10:23 AM

Magnifique, Valsa! I think there are two Victors here: One is your sublime poem. Two is our Victor on poetry soup! Thanks, Gershon

Malabika Ray Choudhury

May 29, 2022 at 9:07 AM

Beautiful, Valsa. Win big!

May 29, 2022 at 5:26 AM

As beautiful as the photo your poem describes, Valsa.

Connie Marcum Wong

May 29, 2022 at 5:11 AM

This is gorgeous Valsa. A marvel of sunrise. Blessings xxoo

Paulette Calasibetta

May 29, 2022 at 4:55 AM

Lovely Monoku~the imagery is magical! Good Luck in the contest. :)Paulette

May 29, 2022 at 3:57 AM

You captured the victorious rising of the sun well Valsa. Good luck. Tom

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