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citrus sun with lancers beaming above eastern hills, vanquishing gloom May 29, 2022 Syllable count : 17 Morning Monoku Contest Sponsor - Michelle Faulkner

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Jcb Brul

Date: 6/2/2022 10:49:00 PM

This is a breathtaking monoku!! Stunning imagery! Blessings dear friend and congratulations on your win!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/2/2022 7:48:00 PM

what a beauty!!

Anil Deo

Date: 6/1/2022 12:38:00 PM

Congrats Sis Valsa. I like Muchelkes poetry also, as among the best on PS. Shalom shalom

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/1/2022 7:46:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A pretty write and picture. Have a blessed day...............

Beata Agustin

Date: 6/1/2022 12:18:00 AM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this picturesque monoku. God bless you.

John Watt

Date: 5/31/2022 10:50:00 PM

Such an artistic and soul-rousing way to describe the victory of dawn over gloom. Love your title too. Congrats, Valsa

Brian Sambourne

Date: 5/31/2022 9:50:00 PM

A true winner! Such a strong image of morning sun lanching the landscape. Congratulations! Brian

Heidi Sands

Date: 5/31/2022 2:07:00 PM

Congratulations for your win Valsa :)

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 5/31/2022 2:04:00 PM

You caught the hopeful feeling of dawn so perfectly, Valsa, thank you for entering my contest, and congratulations!

Bill Baker

Date: 5/31/2022 8:16:00 AM

Lovely match with photo, welcoming Monoku, Valsa. Have a great week! Bill

I Am Anaya

Date: 5/31/2022 8:01:00 AM

A morning to remember, I hope the spell works! Victor deserves to be happy. Very nice Valsa.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/29/2022 11:09:00 PM

You cannot refer to me. Must be someone else. I am always gloomy these days.

Valsa George
Date: 5/30/2022 8:32:00 PM

Be back to cheer Victor.... ! May God bring you joy !

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/29/2022 10:27:00 AM

GREAT imagery AND message both. A winning combination

Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/29/2022 10:23:00 AM

Magnifique, Valsa! I think there are two Victors here: One is your sublime poem. Two is our Victor on poetry soup! Thanks, Gershon

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 5/29/2022 9:07:00 AM

Beautiful, Valsa. Win big!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/29/2022 5:26:00 AM

As beautiful as the photo your poem describes, Valsa.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/29/2022 5:11:00 AM

This is gorgeous Valsa. A marvel of sunrise. Blessings xxoo

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 5/29/2022 4:55:00 AM

Lovely Monoku~the imagery is magical! Good Luck in the contest. :)Paulette

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/29/2022 3:57:00 AM

You captured the victorious rising of the sun well Valsa. Good luck. Tom