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Victim Or Victor

"I TRY MY BEST" I could be bitter or better but I chose to try to be my best- I could be a kicker or a fighter, for one time I was depressed. I could stand up tall or fall to my knees with regret and shame- I could enthrall in an inner brawl and TRY to forget my name. I could stay inside my comfort zone where I feel more at ease- I could trade my ability to suffer alone in the cold and freeze. I could be a defenseless loss cause with no one to count on- I could be relentless in exhaustion who can’t confront my demon. I could be a prey to my addiction or get healthy and stay better- I could stay afraid of MY affliction or become a wealthy hope spreader. I could be a fool or a scapegoat with nowhere else to run and hide- I could go back to school and explode with anxiety supplied. There are many things that can make or break my confidence- There are plenty of things that can take away my competence, but I have grown and shown my absolute BEST with much difficulty- I have known and am blown away as I reflect on such v i c t o r y. couplet with internal rhyme Victim Or Victor Contest Sponsor: Nayda Ivette Negron Date Written: September 8, 2016

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Date: 9/12/2016 7:33:00 AM
Great, positive writing! Brava! I am reminded of something I read, many years ago, that has since become a staple of my being: "Thou shall not eat, thine own heart."
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Lu Loo
Date: 9/12/2016 12:32:00 PM
very wise Joe, many thanks :)-luloo
Date: 9/9/2016 10:32:00 AM
Laura, a powerful write, I admire your strength of character, best of luck in the contest (ps I sent you a soupymail)
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Lu Loo
Date: 9/9/2016 2:37:00 PM
many thanks Broken Wings :)-luloo
Date: 9/8/2016 10:42:00 PM
this is wonderful, Laura, I love the action in the poem. Good luck in the contest.... :)
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Lu Loo
Date: 9/9/2016 6:37:00 AM
thank you Eve :)-luloo
Date: 9/8/2016 6:37:00 PM
I can't believe you did this so fast, and such a good job of it, Laura. Wow!!
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Lu Loo
Date: 9/8/2016 8:40:00 PM
thanks sometimes I write easier in the middle of the night when I can't sleep lol :)-luloo
Date: 9/8/2016 6:14:00 PM
A wonderful entry for the conntest luloo. I hope it does great! ; ) 7
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Lu Loo
Date: 9/8/2016 8:39:00 PM
thank you Connie :)-luloo
Date: 9/8/2016 11:59:00 AM
A wonderful strong write with such a beautiful message Laura.
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Lu Loo
Date: 9/8/2016 1:16:00 PM
thank you James :)-luloo
Date: 9/8/2016 10:50:00 AM
You go girl. Good luck in the contest, looks like a winner.
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Lu Loo
Date: 9/8/2016 1:15:00 PM
thank yo DM :)-luloo
Date: 9/8/2016 7:59:00 AM
A great one Laura... Good luck in the contest....
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Lu Loo
Date: 9/8/2016 8:01:00 AM
thank you Supraja :)-luloo
Date: 9/8/2016 7:30:00 AM
Superbly done my friend..."I try my best" within the stanzas ...great stuff luloo...god bless and good luck...^WW^
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Lu Loo
Date: 9/8/2016 7:37:00 AM
thank you WW, you are always so sweet...not just to me but to everyone :)-luloo

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