Sotto Poet Poet Imagism

Vibrant Threads of Childhood

Written, September 13, 2024
For the I Form - Imagism Poetry Contest
Sponsor, Constance La France

Quote: Childhood is the most beautiful of all life's seasons." By Poet

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The sight of the emerald lawn is exquisite_
lavender and azure threads intertwine,
elegantly placed in lines of budding leaves,
and young kids play and race with endless zest,
their upholstery is spread out in the yard.
And boxes laden with meals that Mama stuffed,
between biscuits, milk, cheese, jelly, and loaf,
Sunday outdoor activities are unforgettable. 

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Bill Baker October 4, 2024 at 9:17 PM Congratulations on this fine POTD, my friend! I hope you enjoyed your special day of recognition. (a month late). My account was unlocked today so I'm catching up on the POTD's from the last month. It was nice to see your name here today. A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Constance La France October 1, 2024 at 6:32 AM Sotto, congratulations on your win in my Imagism contest, beautifully penned, love the video and quote, and congrats on POTD, Constance

Deb M September 30, 2024 at 9:40 AM Belated Congratulations Lasaad on POTD for a beautiful reflective poem with the most wonderful imagery! Debx

Michael Tor September 30, 2024 at 8:59 AM A belated congratulations Lasaad. Took me back in time and your video accentuated the whole theme and experience of your write. So glad to read your poetry again, as you probably know I have been away for a while.

Regina Mcintosh September 26, 2024 at 10:46 PM Yes. God bless you and Congrats! Love, Gina

Maria Williams September 23, 2024 at 4:18 AM A belated congratulations on your POTD Soto, and worthy of winning the contest. The accompanying video is also so appropriate. Brings back memories. Maria

Valsa George September 22, 2024 at 9:03 PM The sight of children playing on the lawn brings memories of our childhood days. On Sundays and holidays, children of our times had so many delightful outdoor activities. Your poem has revived a number of nostalgic memories in me. Congratulations dear Lasaad on your well deserved POTD

Sara Kendrick September 22, 2024 at 1:44 PM Yes, Sundays of years ago did offer those kinds of exciting experiences. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Nice to remember a Sunday afternoon even though my experience wasn't exactly the same. Sara K

Brandy Nicole September 21, 2024 at 7:02 PM Moments bloom and children learn so much during this season. Your quote leaves me in complete awe. You've created a masterpiece, Lasaad. This is beautiful in every way. Congratulations my dear friend, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Sam Kauffman September 21, 2024 at 10:53 AM Hi Lasaad! What delightful snapshots of a Sunday afternoon! I think you really painted a wonderful picture where we can revel in a picnic and playfulness with your images. So happy to see you posting again! Best wishes for the contest. Congrats and high fives for your POTD! Blessings to you, dear friend! Sotto Poet September 21, 2024 at 11:54 AM Dear Sam, much appreciate your wonderful review and sweet message. Blessings to you as well.

Daniel Henry Rodgers September 21, 2024 at 9:48 AM Hello Sotto, what a marvelous POTD about childhood that is full of life. Congratulations! Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel Sotto Poet September 21, 2024 at 11:53 AM Hi Dear Daniel and thanks for your kind message and congratulations dear friend

Ink Empress September 21, 2024 at 9:46 AM Back to congratulate you on POTD. Well deserved! Happy to see you featured! Keep sharing! Sotto Poet September 21, 2024 at 11:52 AM Dear Ink, thank you so much for your kind message and unbroken support

Nancy Kaufman September 21, 2024 at 9:06 AM Dear Sotto, Congratulations on this charming POTD. You are such an impressive wordsmith. Best regards, Nancy Sotto Poet September 21, 2024 at 11:51 AM Dear Nancy, thank you so much for your thoughtful message, and sweet congratulations

Kim Rodrigues September 21, 2024 at 7:58 AM How lovely this is, Lasaad! Congrats on a noteworthy POTD! Sotto Poet September 21, 2024 at 11:50 AM Thank you, dear Kim, appreciate your kind words

Malabika Ray Choudhury September 21, 2024 at 7:55 AM Warmest congratulations on POTD, Dear Poet. A superb piece in imagism format - yes, childhood is the best of all life's seasons! Sotto Poet September 21, 2024 at 11:49 AM Dear Malabika, thank you for sweet message and congratulations

Paula Goldsmith September 21, 2024 at 7:43 AM Congratulations on your POTD win. Great to see you here. I enjoyed reading your lovely write. Great Ending. Love your quote.... Have a blessed day with your win....... Sotto Poet September 21, 2024 at 11:48 AM Thank you so much Paula, appreciate your support, you're such a wonderful sweetheart

Tania Kitchin September 21, 2024 at 4:26 AM Lasaad, a wonderful poem, congratulations on POTD. Sotto Poet September 21, 2024 at 6:06 AM Thank you Tania

Unseeking Seeker September 21, 2024 at 1:23 AM Nostalgic. Superbly penned as always, SP. Warmest congratulations on POTD Sotto Poet September 21, 2024 at 6:06 AM Thanks my friend

Karen Jones September 21, 2024 at 1:16 AM Lovely poem about childhood Sotto and congratulations on the achievement potd! Sotto Poet September 21, 2024 at 6:08 AM Karen, thanx for your beautiful words

Beryl Edmonds September 21, 2024 at 12:41 AM Back with congratulations on you receiving the honour of poem of the day… Beryl Sotto Poet September 21, 2024 at 6:08 AM Thank you so much, Beryl.

Tom Cunningham September 21, 2024 at 12:31 AM You paint a beautiful image with your words Lasaad, congratulations to you on the honour of POTD. Tom Sotto Poet September 21, 2024 at 6:09 AM Thank you Tom

Victor Buhagiar September 20, 2024 at 9:54 PM A snapshot of a Sunday picnic with brilliant colourful scenes. The quote is very much to the point. Sotto Poet September 21, 2024 at 6:10 AM Thank you very much, Victor.

Beryl Edmonds September 20, 2024 at 2:22 PM Love the poetry and quote Sotto. Hope all is well… Beryl

Ink Empress September 20, 2024 at 11:56 AM Dear dr sotto! Its so good to see you post! And this is beautiful! So well woven with such intricate imagery flowing in such eloquence! I especially love the opening lines in this, i can see through those words! The green, lavender and azure! Ah! Soulful! Something about kids, and how zestful their presence is truly is uplifting! Brilliant ending too! Sunday activities do sound unforgettable! Please post more! Best wishes for the contest too! Sending you light always!