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Vibrant, Blissful, Quietude

"Bliss like thine is brought by years; Dark with torment and with tears." Emily Bronte - Sleep Not (1846) st.1 _______________________________
often, I am in the throes and agony of my mind I am tortured and each day I grapple with sad thoughts that pinion and shackle me to the past with anchors unyielding, yet beautiful with memories vibrant and ever and immortal . . . and in meditation, I look beyond the firmament to a heavenly utopia where there is only stillness a celestial unearthly place divine a paradise, tranquil and lovely where I sojourn in serenity . . . and there, lissome and graceful I glide- a butterfly I float and drift among ethereal emerald trees yet, the foul besmirch of my past follows all those shadows that restrain me but the beauty beckons me . . . I wish for silken repose and to rest my mind of thoughts to dream- to sleep and slumber in total stillness but, in dreams I struggle with the past so in blissful contemplation I find my peace in my quietude . . . . ______________________ May 21, 2018 Poetry/Free Verse/Vibrant, Blissful, Quietude Copyright Protected, ID 05-1024-942-21 All Rights Reserved, 2018, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, Eight Word Challenge sponsor, John Hamilton, Judged 2018 Second Place Submitted to the Premier contest, Vibrant, Blissful, Stillness sponsor, Unseeking Seeker, Judged 02/25/2022 Fifth Place
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Blodgett Avatar
February 25, 2022 at 9:31 AM
So ethereal and peace filled - your words emulate a great spiritual experience in a way that is simply appealing. It makes a flowing journey for everyone to take a part in. Love this!! Lonna
La France Avatar
February 25, 2022 at 12:49 PM
Lonna, thank you so much for the comment and compliment ~Constance
Anaya Avatar
February 25, 2022 at 8:04 AM
Amazing Constance, congratulations! Have a great weekend!
La France Avatar
February 25, 2022 at 12:50 PM
Anaya, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations ~Constance
Y. Avatar
February 25, 2022 at 6:44 AM
Wow! Constance, Thanks for entering this well-written masterpiece. Excellent content and imagery. Congratulations on a well-deserved win. Have a nice day and weekend-Alexis
La France Avatar
February 25, 2022 at 7:38 AM
Alexis, thank you so much for the compliment, the comment and congratulations ~Constance
Seeker Avatar
February 25, 2022 at 3:49 AM
Congrats on your win, Constance! I see this poem has won another contest too! No wonder! Thanks for sharing with us all again
La France Avatar
February 25, 2022 at 7:40 AM
Seeker, thank you so much for the inspiration and the contest and my placement and the compliment, appreciate ~Constance
Gauthier Avatar
June 9, 2018 at 10:23 PM
Beautiful, BW. Congrats on your top win.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
June 5, 2018 at 2:53 AM
Congratulations, Constance on your win with a great poem.
Gentry Avatar
June 4, 2018 at 11:22 PM
Back to congratulate you on your win. A brilliant verse.
Roper Avatar
June 4, 2018 at 7:38 PM
Great use of the 8 words and,BW , with great imagery ; congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
Faulkner Avatar
June 4, 2018 at 2:23 PM
Such a beautiful expression of pain and longing - congratulations on your placement in the contest-
Hamilton Avatar
June 4, 2018 at 11:03 AM
This is an amazing poem Constance, I think my favourite from you, congrats on a fine shared win!
La France Avatar
June 4, 2018 at 1:19 PM
John, thank you for the contest and for my awesome placement, appreciate, yes, I did pour my heart and soul into this write ~
Gentry Avatar
May 22, 2018 at 5:42 PM
An amazing read. You used the words smoothly and and brilliantly. Should be on top of winners list, but you can't go by me :)
Dietrich Avatar
May 22, 2018 at 3:22 PM
Brilliant writing you did here for John's contest, constance. Love how you used the words!
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