Home » Poems » Liam Mcdaid » Venus You Smile Away To Beautiful

Venus You Smile Away To Beautiful

Hold me at peace In your sunlight grace Precious drops on a pearl of one star that twinkles I reach out to touch you love Inside the fire shoots an arrow Through the heart Where dreams of you live forever..... .....And in this blessed heart Forever heaven's song singing The fire within a burning sun In my sky your star more divine Love's fire eternal An arrow strikes deep The fire rises to consume Ever the heart dreams of you A Collaboration By, Liam Mcdaid. & Michael P Clarke.

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Vladislav Raven

Date: 10/11/2016 7:19:00 PM

Hi Liam, sorry it has taken me so long to get here. Got me a bug as usual, pesky little blighters. Well partner, it is always an honour and a pleasure to join ink with you Liam and we shall do it more often. Loved the way this one came out Liam. You always make the experience enjoyable and it is always easy to follow. It's good to be back in collab mode Liam. Let your heart always sing as it wishes to do my friend. This is a fave and a seven,...Mike.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/10/2016 3:12:00 PM

image -laden with sweet desire.. greeat collab with michael, liam... charm away!..huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/10/2016 2:31:00 PM

- Beautiful dreams and beautiful poems from both of you, Michael & Liam :) - Best wishes and warm hugs always // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Smith

Date: 10/9/2016 4:29:00 PM

So romantic gentlemen...The ladies will be melting over this one.

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 10/9/2016 3:31:00 PM

Hi Liam!Wow!Wow!This is a very beautiful,romantic,tender,sweet,passionate,captivating love poem,you've written here my dearest friend Liam,in collaboration with Mike.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!I love it!A very beautiful, heartfelt,romantic,dreamy, heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet!So profound!Just amazing! truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem!Just beautiful!Outstanding imagery!Excellent collaboration.Your pens are truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + each!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray alot you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 10/9/2016 3:21:00 PM

Very very beautiful Mars.Excellent collab.