Venus I,Ii

Venus I, II 


                          I
Moonlight shone upon a withered, weary 
heart, warped and scarred by a life of many
failures and dreams unfulfilled. 
now she is a slave to her own thoughts, 
and undying feelings of indifference. sitting 
in a carcass of wasted time. like the 
persistence of memory. 
the master of puppets pulls on her 
heartstrings.
tells her to take that
forbidden road. 
she lives on the dark side of the moon.
yet her volcanic beauty is like a rare 
celestial body. 
Galileo laid eyes upon for the first time 
through a telescope back in 1610,
and sketched into our history books 
for future human beings to gaze at 
and be marveled by.
this is what her beauty is like. 
Venus is not merely a person, or planet —
she is consciousness. 
her eyes are like Egyptian pools,
they show a reflection of her eternal soul
which flows like the Nile; 
it could give life to entire civilizations.
this is the source of her beauty, 
a fiery, inexplicable warmth 
fueled from the embers 
that remain burning in her caged soul—
unblemished by time, by age, 
and by failure. 
Venus is not merely a person, or planet 
she is the very essence of life, 
and its representation of beauty.
Venus is the trees and the flowers unaware 
of the peace they bring to humans.
Venus may not see it, though she glistened 
through the cosmos with a radiance that 
threatened even that of the moon and the 
sun's. 
                                                       II
                            yet to her, time is a grain of sand trickling 
		                          down in an hourglass
			            	       with every 
                                                 moment
                                                 in her life
                                                 and every
                                           moment to ever be
                          only as meaningful as these grains of sand.

she doesn’t see the big picture, 
she doesn’t see her beauty, 
and these are both great tragedies. 
still, she stays on full display in the night sky,
the girl who was afraid to be,
Venus…
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022


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