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Venus Comes To the Rescue

She sat on a small window bench Her head resting on her hand Looking out into the dark glooming As the silvery moon rose to shine On the rippling waves of the bay. It seems she was winkling at her. Telling her not to give up hope, On the horizon sailed a large boat. A red light flashing every now and then. Was it in distress? Was there something wrong? She phoned for help the harbour manager of the bay. Soon small ships raced to the yacht, The captain cursed himself for forgetting the flares. Still with help of all, the yacht was towed to harbour And all was safe and sound. The feverous glow of growing sunrise, Reminded the captain to thank his rescuer. And what a sight it was to see the beauty Spying on her luxury yacht. She was invited to dinner on the boat And love was in the air. And why not? She was a Venus descended from up above.

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Date: 1/14/2022 3:22:00 AM
Indeed a surprise ending with the message that they 'saw, met and conquered'. Like the hero and heroine of a fairy tale they must have lived happy together ever after! Congratulations Victor, though late.....
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Date: 8/25/2021 1:13:00 PM
What a poem and what a fertile poetic imagination you have Victor my friend. Congratulations on POTD for this superb write. Blessings and hugs Jennifer.
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Date: 8/25/2021 11:55:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD! Much deserved!
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Date: 8/24/2021 2:44:00 AM
Back with my congratulations on you receiving poem of the day… Hugs, Belle
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Date: 8/23/2021 7:08:00 PM
Such a wonderful feeling, knowing that love will always find a way. This is so beautiful and romantic. Congratulations Victor, on Poem of the Day. :) Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 8/23/2021 6:52:00 PM
Wow Victor this is truly wonderful many congrats on your POTD. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
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Date: 8/23/2021 12:50:00 PM
Victor, congratulations on POTD with your romantic poem! hugs
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Date: 8/23/2021 12:24:00 PM
Wonderful story Victor, Congrats on POTD
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Date: 8/23/2021 10:42:00 AM
Victor, your poem is wonderful, so romantic and a big congratulations of your deserving POEM OF THE DAY enjoy the honor ~Constance
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Date: 8/23/2021 9:29:00 AM
Congrats Victor on your POTD.
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Date: 8/23/2021 8:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. A lovely and romantic write. I love it. Have a great/blessed day.
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Date: 8/23/2021 8:36:00 AM
A positive poem in our un-positive world! How nice, Victor! Congratulations on POTD!
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Date: 8/23/2021 8:14:00 AM
Back with congratulations on POTD, my friend well deserved. Hugs
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Date: 8/23/2021 7:53:00 AM
A very beautiful happy-ending poem, Victor, congratulations on your POTD:)
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Date: 8/23/2021 7:42:00 AM
What. Positive ending to this romantic write. Do good, good happens. Congratulations on your well deserved Potd. Enjoy the honour friend
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Date: 8/23/2021 6:51:00 AM
Congratulations for this nice POTD :)
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Date: 8/23/2021 6:32:00 AM
Aw so beautifully penned romantic write dear Victor. You truly amaze us with storytelling skills through your lovely verses... Hearty congrats on your well deserved POTD... God bless... ~ Ani
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Date: 8/23/2021 5:41:00 AM
Glad to see you again in this space, Victor. Back with BIG congrats on poem of the day. Enjoy your day.
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Date: 8/23/2021 4:48:00 AM
This is a very romantic story written in beautiful verses full of description and vivid images. Congratulations!
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Date: 8/23/2021 4:08:00 AM
Such a beautiful tale Victor! Congratulations!!
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Date: 8/23/2021 3:08:00 AM
Congrats on POTD, Victor! Well deserved, indeed
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Date: 8/23/2021 2:47:00 AM
- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d., Victor :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/23/2021 2:14:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD, Victor. Well done.
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Date: 8/23/2021 1:00:00 AM
Back with congratulations Victor on POTD, enjoy the honour. Tom
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Date: 8/22/2021 9:12:00 PM
Romance to feel and make the soul warm and wanted. Great write.
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