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written for Sara Jama contest... 

Premiere Contest WinnerVenom and Stardust

h u r t me…
with your deadly devotion,
leave lethal love-bites
across pulsing pages…
I ache to wear the burning blaze
of your rhymes around my neck,
to be choked by poetic desire,
to be punished with personified fire…

but what is a jewel 
            without your touch?
there is no gold ~ free-falling
from outer space,
deeper than sparks rising higher,
in tune with the mercury madness,
the cosmos of craving ~

taste this undying thirst
for ethereal union,
wrist to wrist, poem to poem,
ink to ink, skin to skin,
lips locked in longing,
as I yearn for eternal rest ~
knowing that when
I return, you’ll still be there,
willingly mine, evermore,
leashed to my Stygian stars,
O beloved blue moon rarity,
my Orpheus of musical silver,
where the throb of Eurydice
echoes like the pain of passion
I cradle within ~ heaven’s roses
bruised by obsession,
throned in an orchard of thorns
where every petal bleeds
the fragrance 
          of fatal fidelity ~

surrender 
      to my fixated fantasy,
worship the warmth of want,
as I slip into the
void of this endless black,
swallowing the ambrosia
from your acidic tongue
that drips venom and verses,
hauntingly hypnotizing
with the wet
heat of a rain-soaked lyre,
where we will be reborn
from the underworld ashes
of ghost-glazed diamonds…

I crave to be the cluster of reasons,
the wedded widow,
still gowned in viper’s devouring,
chained in anklets jeweled
with jinxed jade,
dragging me down a realm
of the unspoken 
parts of the underworld ~
oblivious to the earthly creatures
crawling through coldness…

I am smoothly strangled 
by the symphonic sentiments
of a loyal liaison,
an epic obedience,
that made the angels of life and death
weep and sleep
to the sound of defiant dews
of a reckless romance ~
for love seeps from curling
words into a
floundering bloodstream,
tying fanatic temptation
to the corpse tunes of gothic twilight…
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George Avatar
August 14, 2026 at 3:04 AM
'Love seeps from curling words into a floundering blood stream'... Wow, how powerful. When l read it a second time, l am more than enchanted by your images and metaphors. Dear Empress, no wonder you are surrounded by trophies. Hearty Congratulations gifted one.👏👏❤️
Jones Avatar
July 28, 2026 at 2:48 PM
Powerful write Inky! Congratulations on your most deserved top win!
Sultan Avatar
July 27, 2026 at 6:28 AM
Simply beautiful, romantic and painful at the same time.Your poetic expression always very interesting,unique and intense what I love the most.Congrt stay blessed:}
Pina Avatar
July 26, 2026 at 1:25 PM
Such a beautiful poem, thank you for participating in my contest. Hope all is well - Seth
Dietrich Avatar
July 17, 2026 at 4:30 PM
Back with my congrats on this sublime and Gothic poetry you excelled in for the challenge. How are you today?
Borg Avatar
July 17, 2026 at 2:13 PM
Borg Avatar
July 17, 2026 at 2:16 PM
Mind-blowingly beautiful! Congratulations on another win, Empress.
Gibbons Avatar
July 1, 2026 at 5:06 AM
Wow I loveee your explosive creation here Ink I felt the vampire bite ha ha . Total brilliance here Ink hugs n moonbeams and stars forever shine. I'm so glad I found this site and so many inspiring writers like yourself.~ <3
Seeker Avatar
June 17, 2026 at 8:05 PM
“wrist to wrist, poem to poem, ink to ink, skin to skin” my, my! a delight to read this soul searching, raw emotion scorching poem this morning, much love
Empress Avatar
June 18, 2026 at 9:11 AM
Thank you so much dear seeker. Its always an honor to hear from you. Sending you light always
DiMino Avatar
June 17, 2026 at 2:29 PM
You speak of a love that is imagined… why not? -- some say it is kindness, being considerate, etc, -- but one can be all these things and yet not be in love. No, love is personal to each of us. Mysterious, making it singular. If it can have a stand-in, be replaced, then it is not love. Not great love. A love one chases through an infinite universe, kicking aside stars. Never to catch. To catch is not a poet’s love. To clearly define, is not a poet’s love. Dark, foreboding, intoxicating, venomous once bitten. Terminal in a glorious sense.
George Avatar
June 17, 2026 at 5:24 AM
Dear Empress, this is an epic of dark poetry. I am unable to fathom into the depths of your poem. I have no words. I feel that you derive a kind of pleasure, a self denying delight in your pain. Love hurts and it hurts deep, yet it survives. The story of Orpheus and Eurydice, you have referred in your poem exemplifies the pain of loss and longing. Your highly alliterative poem is equally stunning and emotive.
Dietrich Avatar
June 17, 2026 at 12:02 AM
You are so good with this kind of challenge. I wrote this one too, just not posted yet, but I think I used the prompts different from yours. Your poem is emotive and impactful from the dark lines you chose. This poem is In your wheelhouse for sure, Sweetie. Haha. I just read Roberts comment to you!
Empress Avatar
June 17, 2026 at 3:26 AM
Cant wait to read your poem sweet Andrea! Thank you for being supportive always! I appreciate your presence! And yes, about the comment haha. Sending you light always....
Goldsmith Avatar
June 16, 2026 at 12:50 PM
"Venom and Stardust" is a powerful write/picture. You really had a hold on me. Have you thought about writing books??? "Good Luck" Have a blessed/great day writing away.............
Empress Avatar
June 17, 2026 at 3:20 AM
I have written some books dear Paula. Have you seen some of my blog posts? You might get an idea. Thank you so much sweet soul, for supporting me and so many! Sending you light always
Bordner Avatar
June 16, 2026 at 12:49 PM
Romance unriddled with a tongue of punishing love, a heart body reformed, part by tender part with a cudgel of kiss and authority of absolute affection, a ribboning of myth, magic and matrimony proving that tragedy can not ruin a love Indomitable...I love how you have resurrected and redeemed Orpheus and Eurydice Poetess, so perfectly romantic. Your willingness to endure sensuous love puishment is such a testament to true passion, and your masterful seaming together of desire, mythology, devotion and love truth is so amazing...J.A.B. An absolute FAV!!!
Empress Avatar
June 17, 2026 at 3:19 AM
" cudgel of kiss" iv not heard anyone say that before, your comments are sincere, and you always come up with such unique lines! And I love the way youv interpreted the poem as well as how youv felt it: thank you so much for your warm support. Appreciate also the fave. Sending you light today and always dear Justin.
Cunningham Avatar
June 16, 2026 at 11:12 AM
A verse of longing and want but of rejection too, quite a dark and foreboding write IE. Good luck in the contest. Tom
Empress Avatar
June 17, 2026 at 3:17 AM
Thank you so much for being supportive dear Tom, I appreciate your kindness. Sending you light always
Liguori Avatar
June 16, 2026 at 8:22 AM
Haha!!! Your poem was so intense, so hot and fiery, so emotional…. It crashed the PoetrySoup server!!! (Just kidding). Always a delight to read; thank you.
Empress Avatar
June 16, 2026 at 8:26 AM
Haha I thought so too dear Robert, I was like :O and then theres a cute baby pouting haha! Saying “ server crashed” or something! Anyhow, I appreciate always your support! Hope to see you write for this contest! Sending you light always
Rodgers Avatar
June 16, 2026 at 7:55 AM
Dear Empress, Wow, all I can think about is a whole cosmos of longing here that is dark, incandescent, and impossibly alive. I contemplated the way you mix mythology with desire, devotion with danger, feels like standing inside a constellation that’s breathing. Breathless! To be more poetic, it moves like heat through metal, shaping something fierce and beautiful at once. No one writes this gothic-mythic voltage the way you do. A Mythic-Gothic FAV! Blessings, Daniel
Empress Avatar
June 16, 2026 at 8:25 AM
“ heat through metal” i might use that as a prompt on instagram someday! Love it dear Daniel. Thank you for praising me so generously! I appreciate your kindness truly always! I love the fave and what you said about my poetry! Sending you light always
Onpaper Avatar
June 16, 2026 at 6:32 AM
I ache to wear the burning blaze of your rhymes around my neck, to be choked by poetic desire, to be punished with personified fire… Oh my!!!! It’s definitely on then papiii!!!! but what is a jewel without your touch?… mine!!! Ok um on the way to give u jewel !!!taste this undying thirst for ethereal union,.. mmmm I shall taste it from a golden goblet!!!!!! swallowing the ambrosia O-O.. from your acidic tongue O_O that drips venom and verses,damn!!! Guuuuurl u dnt gotta tell me twice!!! Mmmm that ending linesssss!!!! for love seeps from curling words into a floundering bloodstream, tying fanatic temptation to the corpse tunes of gothic twilight… Gosh u just know how to take my breath away papi!!!! You fantastically fascinating gothic melody!!!!!
Empress Avatar
June 16, 2026 at 6:55 AM
Papi, your comment is so very sweet! Haha! Breathe!!!
Lane Avatar
June 16, 2026 at 6:24 AM
Writing in the realm of Gothic darkness is your forte'...You lose yourself between love and hate, or is it deep sorrow and angst? The phrase, "fatal fidelity" struck me as the epitome of how this woman felt. They are in opposition to what love should be. Is she being strangled by love or the lack of it? The rose is there, but so are the thorns. Your readers decide her emotions, and we know not of her fate. Sara loves this style of poetic plight.
Empress Avatar
June 16, 2026 at 6:49 AM
Ah it has a touch of sadomascohism, pain and pleasure, love that is consuming and not conventional but intense and on obsession and surrender. The kind of love that knows not separation. I am so pleased to see you read my poem dear Linnersz. Yes Sara loves mythology and dark poetry, Sending you light always
Winter Avatar
June 16, 2026 at 5:46 AM
Dear I E, I love the intensity of this poem! The way you've written this poem is truly remarkable. Your poem felt like a gothic rose entwined with romance. The imagery and the metaphors are truly brilliant. I genuinely enjoyed reading your poem. Best, Anne
Empress Avatar
June 16, 2026 at 6:45 AM
Awwn thank you dear Anne, its always so good to hear from you, the minute I posted this poem, soup server crashed haha. Im so glad its back up. And your comment warmed my heart. Sending you light always
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