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Vengeful Raven

Some people feel the need to be unhappy. They roam the real world dissatisfied and angry and hateful and vengeful. Raven visits her fantasy world every evening when death rattles her windows And she suffocates inside. She does not want to die, but she is dead inside. Nothing is working, but her gun. She carries her gun for protection from the horrors of her childhood. Hatred is her only reality. There is never a way to recover what has been lost. So little time to make this unbearable life whole again. Walking among the dead gives her a sense of power and justice. The underground can smell It and do not like it. The air is filled with misery, yet she can breathe better her than in her real world. She gets so alone sometimes that it just makes sense to her. Raven is a soldier. Her body is her temple, her bunker where she can run for cover. She gets mean at the obscene. Takes risks and lashes out. The darkness is her friend. Her solitude. Her time to take back what has been stolen from her. Her soul. She decides if death is so scary then life can't be that bad. Among the Dead Contest by Kristen Bruni

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Date: 2/24/2011 11:58:00 AM
I had only read a couple of the poems and wanted so badly to enter but...too many things were going on and didn't get to. I knew Constance would have a time selecting her winners. There is a long list of winners here. You should be so proud of your winning poem congratulations Kristen. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/19/2011 11:18:00 AM
Wonderful write here Kristen!Congrats on your well deserved win in the contest.---kashinath
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Date: 2/19/2011 7:27:00 AM
Many congratulations Kristen on your fine win in Constance's wonderful contest....:)
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Date: 2/18/2011 7:21:00 AM
Kristen, this is truly a remarkable poem. I like the way Raven finds more solitude "walking among the dead" than she does in her painful life. Congratulations on your success in the contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/18/2011 12:48:00 AM
Great story,Kristen. Many congrat's on your BIG WIN. Lainie
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Date: 2/17/2011 8:43:00 PM
A fantastic end to this lovely write. many congratulations.
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Date: 2/17/2011 7:23:00 PM
Nice writing Kristen. Congratulations on having Constance select this to rank among the winners in her contest.
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Date: 2/17/2011 6:45:00 PM
Congratulations Kristen on your honored place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 2/17/2011 5:56:00 PM
Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest of constance, kristen
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Date: 2/17/2011 5:15:00 PM
Congrats Kristen on your winning poem in Among the Dead contest ...enjoy your sweet success with luv..
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Date: 2/1/2011 2:51:00 PM
Awesome entry for Constance and her unique contest Kristen.. good luck with your interpretation of Raven... thankxx so very much for my 11th place in your contest for my entry "True Myth"... it was so fun and congrats to u for a super challenge luv..
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Date: 2/1/2011 6:01:00 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest.
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Date: 1/31/2011 8:09:00 PM
Wonderful Kristen, wow this is going to be a awesome contest, every entry i've read are brilliant, and this is up with the best of them. Just love this. Harry
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