Velvet Tulip Serenade-Pirouette

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Written: March 21, 2025, for contest Sponsored by: Constance La France Quote": The bliss derived from the splendor of nature, adorned with a stunning variety of flowers is a delight for all the creatures that occupy this earth. By Poet **************** A crimson tulip basks in the sun-drenched meadow Luring a dancer dressed in a jewel state of ecstasy Tender, an array of wings glides across Kismet Gate Pirouettes with delight mutter on velvety petals Sipping aromatic ambrosia amid the bloom Soaring across the air, seeking honeyed nectar Butterflies flutter over radiant flower shadow!

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Valsa George

Date: 3/25/2025 4:36:00 AM

Wow, so beautiful. This is a poetic jewel leading us to the gates of Heaven where we forget to mutter and are sheltered under the shadow of celestial wings. A lovely poem on the enticing marvels of nature. Congratulations on your well deserved win, dear friend.

Krishnanand Guptar

Date: 3/24/2025 4:16:00 AM

Congratulations, dear poet, on your top placement with a splendid write celebrating the beauty of nature at its best season. Wish you a blessed day with light and sunshine.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/24/2025 2:32:00 AM

- Back with a congrats, Las :) - hugs

Jay Narain

Date: 3/22/2025 10:54:00 AM

A poetic jewel. Nicely written.

Ink Empress

Date: 3/22/2025 2:12:00 AM

This is absolutely gorgeous! So heartwarming to read and so very creatively worded! I love so many lines in this including the quote and also the wordplay and your use of given prompts! I also love the lines “ Sipping aromatic ambrosia amid the bloom Soaring across the air, seeking honeyed nectar” romantic and so very pretty! Your choice of words and use of alliterations and metaphors to paint imagery is truly very impressive! Best wishes always! Sending you light

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/22/2025 1:45:00 AM

- Beautifully written, Las :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs

Paige Hind

Date: 3/21/2025 7:33:00 PM

Enchanting. Loved your imagery - "flower shadow"

Deb M

Date: 3/21/2025 4:09:00 PM

Beautiful imagery and beautiful words for a beautiful flower Lasaad! The title drew me in….just lovely! Debx