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Vapour a moist Gathering,spreading In a large field fog

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Bette Bavington

Date: 3/5/2020 1:05:00 PM

Nice imagery of how fog envelopes a field.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/5/2020 1:46:00 PM

Hello Bette Bavington, so nice to see you here.Thank you for the lovely comment. have a nice day my friend.

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 3/5/2020 8:45:00 AM

A cinquain executed to perfection.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/5/2020 12:02:00 PM

Hello Maurice Yvonne, thank you for the lovely comment. I have ev=njoyed this write. Have a nice day my friend.

Alkas Poetry

Date: 2/28/2020 12:04:00 PM

So imagery, you painted a landscape in poetry... salute dearest, alkas

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/28/2020 12:14:00 PM

xx-oo

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/28/2020 12:11:00 PM

Hello Alakas Poetry,hi, nice to see you here.Thank you for the lovely comment. Salute Alakas. it has been snowing here for 4 days off and on. Along with that there is snow squals. i stay inside. Enjoy your day.

Mike Gentile

Date: 2/28/2020 9:51:00 AM

Simple and elegant in its imagery Darlene! Very nice, Happy Friday xxoo

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/28/2020 12:13:00 PM

Hello Mike Gemtle , Yes simple this how i see the fog. Happy Friday to you. xxxx-oo.

Susan Ashley

Date: 2/27/2020 4:01:00 PM

Your creative imagery brings the fog to lovely life, Darlene. I see the gray spreading itself across the field. A beautiful poem. Warmest wishes, my dear friend.. ~Susan

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/27/2020 5:23:00 PM

Hello Susan Ashley,I am pleased you enjoyed my poem. I also enjoy your poetry. Have a nice evening my friend. Hugs

Peter Dome

Date: 2/26/2020 5:40:00 PM

very clever, and so visual. Well done.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/26/2020 6:36:00 PM

Hello peter Dome,thank you for the lovely comment. So noce to met you. Have a nice evening my friend.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/26/2020 3:56:00 PM

you described it very well, Darlene

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/26/2020 6:37:00 PM

Hello Andrea,Thank you Andrea. have a nice evening my friend. Hugs Darlene

Charlie Smith

Date: 2/25/2020 4:34:00 PM

Always a pleasure Darlene...

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/25/2020 5:02:00 PM

Hello Charlie Smith, oh-thank you Charlie... i hope all is well with you.Have a nice evening my friend.

Vickie Hurtt - Thayer

Date: 2/25/2020 2:58:00 PM

Lovely Darlene..."a moist gathering" the words are clever.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/25/2020 5:04:00 PM

Hello Vickie Thayer,thank you Vickie.I hope you are doing well. Also i hope you had a nice day. Enjoy your evening my friend.

Arturo Michael

Date: 2/25/2020 2:43:00 AM

Nice imagery Darlene...As it spreads across the fields...

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/25/2020 7:41:00 AM

Hello Arturo Michael, to see someone walk in a field is creepy, when you don't see their feet moving. It is like they are floatingin the air. Have a nice day my friend.

Winged Warrior

Date: 2/24/2020 6:02:00 PM

As the fog clears, I can see your Cinquain Darlene...beautifully done my friend...all the best from the Wingster...and have a wonderous night...^WW^ :o)

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/25/2020 7:43:00 AM

Hello Winged Warrior,I appreciate your comment. Have a nice day my friend.

Jan Allison

Date: 2/24/2020 5:55:00 PM

very well penned Darlene:-) hugs Jan xx

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/25/2020 7:47:00 AM

Hello Jan, thank you for the lovely comment. Have a nice day my friend. Hugs Darlene xx

Panagiota Romios

Date: 2/24/2020 5:52:00 PM

Hi, Darlene, A great Cinquain. I liked the image it created in my mind. Good one! Panagiota xx

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/25/2020 7:49:00 AM

Hello Panagiota, thank you for for the lovely comment. have a nice day my friend. Darlene xx