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Vaporizing Whispers

I'm torn in poetry ~ like a fractured syllable scattered across altars of glistening gold, mirroring the maskless faces of those, who once sold their sanctity for sins. Perhaps, there's a cursed moonlight, to which I'll tie the champagne mists of my last summer roses and roar above kyanite knights, dressed in dried dandelions ~ whistling away dainty dreams to distant shores, ruffled with wistful vines and wrinkled memories. I've felt the silent hum of grief slowly crawling in my crying bones ~ each moment mourning the demise of desires, beneath a graveyard of carefully sown seeds. Knowing, this ancient storm keeps swirling within me ~ will you still unfurl an eden of elixirs, where peace is a prayer of Persephone, glowing with guava glints? Perhaps, life is a cage ~ and I have been enslaved by those sleepless prisoners, etching my spirit in a treasure chest, weighing down my scars with moonstones, where origami hearts lay beneath their glare ~ overburdened by satanic shine... "I miss you... my light as I still remember, the image of you fading in vapours, yet, igniting a million crystalline charms ~ softly fluttering in burgundy blurs of bougainvillea, soaring away from sullen sunflowers and vanishing in watercolor seraph-dust... But, you will find me following your abstract tears streaked in a silken mosaic ~ whispering velveteen sagas of a tragedy untold... where my tributaries of trust trace your remorseful rivers, reeling with rage. " But no longer, do your demons dare to ensnare the eagle-eyed edges of the introspective ink within me ~ nor does my faith hangs from a thread of fate ~ keeping me clenched, to the mercy of your monstrous manipulations, misinterpreting my metaphors... for, I have become an esoteric enchantress, drenched in whiskey clemency ~ breathing truths in their purest hues. As the light of all lights, healing my heart chakra, and reviving my cosmic kundalini, has encased me in a platinum halo where all elements of yoga ~ shelter spiritual souvenirs in an eternal flame... O' messengers of the divine, carry me in apricot chariots and ride this soul to undiscovered dynasties, where ribbons unravel an unforseen fortune of mystical manifestations ~ unleashing slaves of yesterday, beyond the swarovski keystrokes of tomorrow's twirling tulips... "as the Lord exhales henna stars ~ they swirl within me like leaflets, rinsing every wound with tulsi perfumes and turmeric tides... "

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Date: 2/1/2025 1:48:00 PM
Hiya gets me every time. I've missed reading your astounding creations. This is such a beautiful piece, metaphors and alliterations are profound and breathtaking. "as the Lord exhales henna stars ~they swirl within me like leaflets, rinsing every wound with tulsi perfumes and turmeric tides... " Greatly done Hiya.
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Date: 12/23/2024 12:04:00 PM
Hi. You are an excellent poet. You should be a premier member. There is a sale going on for $39 at PS. If you don't mind, I can sponsor you. There are no strings attached. I would like to see more of your poems published in a yearly anthology. Let me know by soup mail. Thanks.
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Date: 12/22/2024 8:46:00 PM
I enjoy your creativity. Your poem has many facets and heartwarming metaphors.
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Date: 12/19/2024 11:22:00 AM
Hiya, I love to see the expectations you describe for yourself despite anything out there trying to hold you back..."For, I have become an esoteric enchantress, drenched in whiskey clemency ~ breathing truths in their purest hues." That comes from the beautiful heart that you have and that you share with us here. You're making me smile now. OMG, it's a pleasure to see your strength. Wonderful!!
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Date: 12/19/2024 10:06:00 AM
The power of your verse is a light to rising poets. Alliteration and metaphors are perfectly enmeshed in your poetic acumen. Your poetry always pleases.
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Date: 12/19/2024 8:10:00 AM
Your the light of all lights, Hiya. You have everything that shines bright in your epic poem, so beautiful.
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Date: 12/19/2024 5:56:00 AM
Dear Hiya, Wow, it was like stepping into a world where everything feels both fragile and fierce, soft and sharp, and utterly alive with meaning. The way you use language here is nothing short of mesmerizing—each line a brushstroke, painting moments that feel so personal, yet universally true. What a gift, one that takes its time to unfold in the reader's heart. Just a beautiful, vulnerable piece of your soul. Happy Holidays, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Date: 12/18/2024 10:33:00 AM
a verse of redemption conveying the power of light within...you left no stone unturned by utilizing poetic tools to capture the very essence of chi, of energy through enlightenment,, hiya! cheers
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Date: 12/18/2024 9:44:00 AM
Great poem from an elite poet.
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Date: 12/18/2024 7:53:00 AM
'I've felt the silent hum of grief slowly crawling in my crying bones ~ each moment mourning the demise of desires,' -- the ego claws at the walls of consciousness, refusing to amiably release -- "O' messengers of the divine, carry me in apricot chariots and ride this soul to undiscovered dynasties," -- Lovely, beautiful poetry, a gift to be treasured. "rinsing every wound with tulsi perfumes and turmeric tides... " Beautiful! Profound.
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Date: 12/18/2024 4:49:00 AM
Sometimes my life is full of confusion and tearing apart of the soul, but praise be to God, He pulls me back to sanity and sends me on my way. Thanks for sharing this one. Sara K
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Date: 12/18/2024 3:00:00 AM
Where do i start praising this? I just read this and was in awe of your alliterations that flow in such a seamless manner, not at all forced and the depth of metaphors and how youv used symbolism here is beyond impressive. I love the way youv written and expressed how you found light from within and how your heart chakra and kundalini did ignite through light within amidst all the cursed moonlight and everything else that did weigh you down. I love your use of flowers and gems and also colors~ to depict inner thoughts in such an artistic manner, it feels like you did paint all your thoughts with soulful brushstrokes and never fractured syllables but profound wordplay! Youv really interpreted the line of enquiry so well here. I love it especiallt~
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Date: 12/18/2024 3:02:00 AM
“ the eagle-eyed edges of the introspective ink within me ~” loveee eagle eyed! And also “ as the Lord exhales henna stars ~ they swirl within me like leaflets, rinsing every wound with tulsi perfumes and turmeric tides..” just beautiful! We both ended with tulsi haha! Connected! Definitely a top win! Best wishes and sending you light always angelic star

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