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Vanity

Fifth floor walk-up, light is fading, lamp is lit, the curtains stay pulled back; loose-limbed and limber like a tiger set to spring she's geared up for the evening's entertainment. Hungry eyes in mirrored windows watching, palms sweaty and expectant. She's on her mettle, going through her game plan with a slow and sensual grace, puddling her garments and purring like a cat, her pulse is racing! The flutter of her heartbeat and the shortness of her breath betray the depth of her excitement. She draws the drapes, the game is done, yet her vanity still cries for validation.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 2/17/2016 2:47:00 PM
All the guys will love this, Keith. You certainly are a master at painting a scene of lustful cravings that only bring partial satisfaction. Elaine
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 2/17/2016 2:51:00 PM
Thanks Elaine... that was my intention here! Best wishes, Keith
Date: 2/17/2016 12:22:00 PM
The conscious mind extends itself beyond our norms and we enter a world composed of reality, defused with imagination, as the author uses superb imagery and gentle words to bring raw feelings to the page. Emile. #7
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Date: 2/17/2016 2:36:00 PM
Thanks for a most insightful review my friend... I am very grateful. Best wishes, Keith
Date: 2/17/2016 8:24:00 AM
This is a hot one Keith!
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 2/17/2016 9:20:00 AM
Not too hot I hope! Thanks Richard. Keith

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