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Vanishing point

The sticky glue of longing, gives a sense of belonging, betwixt heartbeat’s silent chime, though life is devoured by time. Soul’s adrift as goalposts shift and decay of form is swift, yet we clutch at wisps of straw, until heart begins to thaw. When thoughts recede and love leads, rapture rises and bliss breeds, thinning out wayward ego, as dark desires we forgo. Our ego’s vanishing point, is when we opt to anoint the void as soul’s dwelling place, invoking God’s boundless grace.

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Date: 9/26/2024 12:41:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Vanishing Point" write. Great Ending... Ego can sure get in one's way in life...  Enjoy your win as you write away............
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Date: 9/26/2024 6:59:00 PM
Thank you, Paula dear
Date: 9/23/2024 7:46:00 AM
profound write, beautiful poetic form. congratulations on your win dear poet.
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Date: 9/23/2024 10:59:00 AM
Thank you, TCM
Date: 8/28/2024 10:02:00 AM
Nice inspirational poem on vanishing point.
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Date: 8/28/2024 6:01:00 PM
Thank you, Jay!
Date: 8/28/2024 9:20:00 AM
A thought provoking and inspirational read! Thanks for sharing!!
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Date: 8/28/2024 9:33:00 AM
Delighted these words resonate in your glowing heart, Robert
Date: 8/28/2024 7:54:00 AM
This is a lovely poem. It rewards the reader with a solid belief.
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Date: 8/28/2024 8:30:00 AM
Thank you, Hilda :)

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