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Vanilla Skies

Today I bask in vanilla skies as caramel falls upon me. It is such a delightful feeling, I must be in utopia. I noticed exotic fruit of every kind. Some I've never seen or ate. But I knew what they were. Next I see a bubbling brook filled with the finest champagne. I don't want to leave this place. As the sun began to set, was my biggest regret. By nightfall my private utopia was gone. Alexis Y. 9-19-19

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Date: 9/23/2019 10:39:00 PM
A delicious imagination!
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Date: 9/20/2019 12:14:00 PM
A Utopia we all search for and if we think we have found it and grasp it, true living and life soon destroys it. An awesome write dear friend. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 9/20/2019 10:26:00 AM
Sounds like the place to be Alexis, Tom
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Date: 9/19/2019 5:03:00 PM
You sketched the beauty of your view expertly, Alexis..indeed a private utopia, so well illustrated.
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Date: 9/19/2019 4:35:00 PM
Aw, I hope it comes back tomorrow. : ) This was fun and enchanting my friend. Sounds like a wonderful place to be.
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