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Vampire Lover

The moonlight filtered through Beautiful gossamer wings And after a tantalizing path they came To rest on my icy skin He took my hand in his His eyes so deep and black I closed my eyes in ecstasy The moonlight melted into the dark His fingertips caressed my neck His hand tightened on my waist The ice travelled down the spine When I spied his snow white teeth His mouth met the nerve on my throat As blood froze in my veins My life now seem to stop As I felt his chilly breath on my toes He bowed before my limp form Melting like a snowflake overworn

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/25/2011 11:45:00 AM
Congratulations Tahera, on your well deserved win in Chris D. Aechtner's contest " Free Verse For Winter". Love, Carol
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Date: 2/19/2011 12:38:00 AM
They made a movie titled "The Vampire Lovers" some years ago right after the movie rating system came into existence. I have never seen it. Congratulations on winning in Chris's contest with this entry.
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Date: 2/18/2011 7:20:00 PM
Hi Tahera :) So happy to see this among the winners :) Enjoyed this one--congrats on your win :)
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Date: 2/18/2011 6:45:00 PM
gosh Tahera, you made a chilling winter poem out of vampire tale. A GREAT entry, very unique. I'm glad I got to see this. Congratulations.
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Date: 2/18/2011 5:49:00 PM
Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest of Chris, Tahera
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Date: 2/18/2011 4:56:00 PM
Ohwee..very different ..I like it..! congrats on your win. BG
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Date: 2/18/2011 4:54:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 2/18/2011 1:22:00 PM
Congratulations on your fine win in the contest, Tahera. An enjoyable read. Always Annalise
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Date: 2/18/2011 12:32:00 PM
Tahera, nice poem, congratulations placing in the top ten with this honored win. Agape, Moses
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Date: 2/18/2011 10:35:00 AM
Tahera, Congratulations on your win in Chris's contest with this wonderful free verse. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/18/2011 9:42:00 AM
tahera, what a unique slant!! my best CONGRATS to you..:) huggs, nette
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Date: 2/18/2011 9:06:00 AM
Cool congrats Tahera my friend on another grand victory in the Winter Free Verse contest with this excellent entry luv.. enjoy.. my friend ..enjoy with much luv..
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Date: 2/10/2011 4:36:00 PM
Your poem sent shivers down my spine, Tahera. Masterfully written with frightening images! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/10/2011 2:18:00 PM
Wow this is chilling yes, but beautiful, I just love a dark theme, awesome poem~~
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Date: 2/10/2011 9:02:00 AM
That last line leaves such a distinct image in my mind, Tahera-- very gripping write on vampires, Tahera-- thank you for dropping by my poem :) I'm doing good :) I hope you are also well :) -- nikko :)
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Date: 2/10/2011 8:14:00 AM
Chilling and wonderful metaphors,....what a great poem!! Loved this Tahera!
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Date: 2/10/2011 7:43:00 AM
Very nice expression of your feelings about the moolight here ---enjoyed :kashinath
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Date: 2/10/2011 2:03:00 AM
Chilling tale,well described
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