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Poetry/Quintain (Sicilian)/Vampire Love
Copyright Protected, ID 06-1557-546-24
All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France

Written June 24, 2023
For the International Premiere contest, A Quintain (Sicilian)
sponsor, Emile Pinet, Judged 07/31/2023

Sixth Place

840 ?Vampire? ideas in 2023 | vampire, vampire art, vampires and werewolves

Walking home from a party one cold night, a man approached and not word did he say: though, he seemed harmless I did have some fright, silently, he gave me a rose bouquet; I was enthralled and never felt the bite ! Oh, I seemed to be in a dreamy trance, and we were in an old graveyard eerie: I was aware of him and took a glance, wanting to kiss him but I was weary; it all seemed like an arranged happenstance ! He opened the door to an ancient crypt, down, down, deep we entered a vintage room: then, suddenly from his strong hold I slipped, a tomb- but I felt no doom and no gloom; in the silence I could that water dripped ! That night he became my eternal love, he was a vampire and still I kissed him: I died- but did not reach heaven above, my life with him happy and never grim; we have an ever undreamed of truelove !

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Kim Merryman

Date: 8/1/2023 7:18:00 PM

Vampires have always fascinated me. A creative romantic write, Constance! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

Constance La France
Date: 8/2/2023 6:00:00 AM

Kim, thank you so much for the comment, compliment and congrats, blessings !

Jan Allison

Date: 7/31/2023 2:30:00 PM

ooh an unusual romance indeed Constance, love the vampire theme you chose, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Constance La France
Date: 7/31/2023 4:40:00 PM

Jan, thank you so much for the compliment, comment and congrats, blessings and hugs !

Emile Pinet

Date: 7/31/2023 2:13:00 PM

Congratulations Constance! Your poem earned you a distinguished place in my contest. You should be proud of your placing, there were many good poems submitted, yet your poem rose above them; well done, my friend, Emile.

Constance La France
Date: 7/31/2023 4:41:00 PM

Emile, thank you so much for the contest and my placement, I am very honored, and thanks for the congratulations, and compliment, blessings !

Panagiota Romios

Date: 6/26/2023 2:12:00 PM

Amazing in creativity and great use of the form. Not to mention, I was outstanding imagination Panagiota.

Constance La France
Date: 6/27/2023 2:04:00 PM

Pangie, thank you so much for the compliment and compliment on my imagination, my mom used to say, that girl has quite the imagination !

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/25/2023 11:10:00 AM

A wonderful write/story. Love the ending. Watch out for men with a rose bouquet. Have a great day/week writing away............

Constance La France
Date: 6/26/2023 8:21:00 AM

Paula, thank you so much for the compliment and comment, lol, yes, I will watch out for men bringing a rose bouquet !

Yann Rolland

Date: 6/24/2023 4:58:00 PM

love an be dangerous, if i understood the ending, fine penning have a sweet week end

Constance La France
Date: 6/26/2023 8:22:00 AM

Yann, thank you so much for the compliment and comment, yes, love can be dangerous !