Jan Allison Poet Rhyme

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Valentine's Day Proposal

Nervous, anxious, praying
my love I express.
Girlfriend blubbers saying 
I’ll marry you - yes!

Parents very happy
we are getting wed,
Bridegroom joyful chappie
banns need to be read!

Joyful girlfriend smiling, 
seals love with a kiss
Planning wedding styling
no longer a ‘miss’!

Booking summer wedding,
bridesmaid will wear blue,
blissful marriage heading
darling I love you!

2/14/18

HAPPY VALENTINES DAY!


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Line Gauthier April 9, 2018 at 7:22 PM Well done, Jan. Congrats on your win. Jan Allison April 10, 2018 at 7:06 AM Thanks Line:-) hugs Jan xx

Anisha Dutta March 16, 2018 at 11:44 PM Really charming. Congrats JAN to win on your wonderful poem. Love. Jan Allison March 17, 2018 at 12:52 AM Thanks Anisha:-) hugs Jan x

Eve Roper March 15, 2018 at 9:58 PM Wonderful imagery in your poem, Jan , and written very well. Congratulations on your win! Hugs ~`* Jan Allison March 16, 2018 at 5:14 AM Thanks so much Eve:-) hugs Jan xx

Gregory Richard Barden March 15, 2018 at 9:42 PM This is joyous and whimsical, and it brightens my spirit - you are SO good at touching hearts, and I must fav this one! Blessings and congratulations on your wonderful win, Jan - keep up the great work, my friend! :-) <3 Jan Allison March 16, 2018 at 5:14 AM aww thanks for the fave Greg, so glad you like it:-) hugs jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong March 14, 2018 at 5:59 PM This poem is sheer perfection Jan! I love it! Congratulations on your wonderful win! : ) xxoo Jan Allison March 16, 2018 at 5:13 AM aww Thanks Connie, I struggle to write romantic poems so I'm delighted you like it:-) hugs Jan xx

Rhoda Tripp March 14, 2018 at 4:11 PM Beautiful and quite a few emotions expressed here. Very well done. Congratulations1 Jan Allison March 16, 2018 at 5:13 AM Thanks Rhoda:-) hugs Jan xx

Gershon Wolf March 14, 2018 at 10:31 AM This is just sooooo sweet, Jan. It captures the innocent joy and anticipation of young lovers marrying, and makes this old phogey want to get married again. I'm showing it to my wife when I get home from work tonight. I bet it rekindles something. Thanks a million!! Congrats on your well-deserved trophy! :) gw Jan Allison March 14, 2018 at 11:35 AM aww why not have your vows renewed Gershon:-) hugs jan xx

Heidi Sands March 14, 2018 at 10:31 AM Congratulations for you win Jan :) Jan Allison March 14, 2018 at 11:34 AM thanks so much Heidi:-) hugs jan xx

Tom Cunningham March 14, 2018 at 10:16 AM Knew it would be up there Jan. Congratulations.

Richard Lamoureux February 16, 2018 at 8:57 AM I see romance is alive and well. Great job. Jan Allison February 17, 2018 at 4:57 AM I wrote it on Valentine's day but struggle with romance, much prefer humour :-) hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper February 15, 2018 at 9:15 PM Nicely done, Jan, luck in the contest... Jan Allison February 17, 2018 at 4:54 AM Thanks eve;-) hugs Jan xx

Reason A. Poteet February 14, 2018 at 8:30 PM Well-done, Jan. Enjoyable read with minimal words. Valentine's Day engagement, probably been more than a few of those over the years. Jan Allison February 15, 2018 at 5:23 AM I proposed to my hubby on Valentine's Day and it wasn't even a leap year:-) hugs jan xx

Line Gauthier February 14, 2018 at 4:56 PM Lovely, Jan. A delightful read. Jan Allison February 14, 2018 at 4:59 PM Thanks Line:-) hugs Jan xx

Alexis Y. February 14, 2018 at 3:41 PM Hi Jan, This a good take on the contest theme. I want to give it a go but it looks challenging but you made it look easy. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. HAPPY VALENTINE'S DAY:-)Alexis Jan Allison February 14, 2018 at 3:47 PM I found it quite challenging Alexis - do give it a go:-) hugs Jan xx

Lin Lane February 14, 2018 at 10:32 AM A confection of happiness you've turned out, Jan. On this day for love, it's a sweet one. Jan Allison February 14, 2018 at 10:38 AM I was inspired by the day - it is actually quite a challenging form:-) hugs jan xx

Tom Cunningham February 14, 2018 at 9:58 AM Beautifully done Jan , today has certainly brought the romance in us all. Happy Valentines day. Regards Tom Jan Allison February 14, 2018 at 10:36 AM Thanks so much Tom hope you have a wonderful day.:-) hugs jan xx