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Valentine's Day Proposal

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Nervous, anxious, praying my love I express. Girlfriend blubbers saying I’ll marry you - yes! Parents very happy we are getting wed, Bridegroom joyful chappie banns need to be read! Joyful girlfriend smiling, seals love with a kiss Planning wedding styling no longer a ‘miss’! Booking summer wedding, bridesmaid will wear blue, blissful marriage heading darling I love you! 2/14/18 HAPPY VALENTINES DAY! Checked with 'rhymezone' and how many syllables 88 syllables Contest sponsored by Joseph May

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Line Gauthier

Date: 4/9/2018 7:22:00 PM

Well done, Jan. Congrats on your win.

Jan Allison
Date: 4/10/2018 7:06:00 AM

Thanks Line:-) hugs Jan xx

Anisha Dutta

Date: 3/16/2018 11:44:00 PM

Really charming. Congrats JAN to win on your wonderful poem. Love.

Jan Allison
Date: 3/17/2018 12:52:00 AM

Thanks Anisha:-) hugs Jan x

Eve Roper

Date: 3/15/2018 9:58:00 PM

Wonderful imagery in your poem, Jan , and written very well. Congratulations on your win! Hugs ~`*

Jan Allison
Date: 3/16/2018 5:14:00 AM

Thanks so much Eve:-) hugs Jan xx

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 3/15/2018 9:42:00 PM

This is joyous and whimsical, and it brightens my spirit - you are SO good at touching hearts, and I must fav this one! Blessings and congratulations on your wonderful win, Jan - keep up the great work, my friend! :-) <3

Jan Allison
Date: 3/16/2018 5:14:00 AM

aww thanks for the fave Greg, so glad you like it:-) hugs jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/14/2018 5:59:00 PM

This poem is sheer perfection Jan! I love it! Congratulations on your wonderful win! : ) xxoo

Jan Allison
Date: 3/16/2018 5:13:00 AM

aww Thanks Connie, I struggle to write romantic poems so I'm delighted you like it:-) hugs Jan xx

Rhoda Tripp

Date: 3/14/2018 4:11:00 PM

Beautiful and quite a few emotions expressed here. Very well done. Congratulations1

Jan Allison
Date: 3/16/2018 5:13:00 AM

Thanks Rhoda:-) hugs Jan xx

Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/14/2018 10:31:00 AM

This is just sooooo sweet, Jan. It captures the innocent joy and anticipation of young lovers marrying, and makes this old phogey want to get married again. I'm showing it to my wife when I get home from work tonight. I bet it rekindles something. Thanks a million!! Congrats on your well-deserved trophy! :) gw

Jan Allison
Date: 3/14/2018 11:35:00 AM

aww why not have your vows renewed Gershon:-) hugs jan xx

Heidi Sands

Date: 3/14/2018 10:31:00 AM

Congratulations for you win Jan :)

Jan Allison
Date: 3/14/2018 11:34:00 AM

thanks so much Heidi:-) hugs jan xx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/14/2018 10:16:00 AM

Knew it would be up there Jan. Congratulations.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 2/16/2018 8:57:00 AM

I see romance is alive and well. Great job.

Jan Allison
Date: 2/17/2018 4:57:00 AM

I wrote it on Valentine's day but struggle with romance, much prefer humour :-) hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper

Date: 2/15/2018 9:15:00 PM

Nicely done, Jan, luck in the contest...

Jan Allison
Date: 2/17/2018 4:54:00 AM

Thanks eve;-) hugs Jan xx

Reason A. Poteet

Date: 2/14/2018 8:30:00 PM

Well-done, Jan. Enjoyable read with minimal words. Valentine's Day engagement, probably been more than a few of those over the years.

Jan Allison
Date: 2/15/2018 5:23:00 AM

I proposed to my hubby on Valentine's Day and it wasn't even a leap year:-) hugs jan xx

Line Gauthier

Date: 2/14/2018 4:56:00 PM

Lovely, Jan. A delightful read.

Jan Allison
Date: 2/14/2018 4:59:00 PM

Thanks Line:-) hugs Jan xx

Alexis Y.

Date: 2/14/2018 3:41:00 PM

Hi Jan, This a good take on the contest theme. I want to give it a go but it looks challenging but you made it look easy. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. HAPPY VALENTINE'S DAY:-)Alexis

Jan Allison
Date: 2/14/2018 3:47:00 PM

I found it quite challenging Alexis - do give it a go:-) hugs Jan xx

Lin Lane

Date: 2/14/2018 10:32:00 AM

A confection of happiness you've turned out, Jan. On this day for love, it's a sweet one.

Jan Allison
Date: 2/14/2018 10:38:00 AM

I was inspired by the day - it is actually quite a challenging form:-) hugs jan xx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 2/14/2018 9:58:00 AM

Beautifully done Jan , today has certainly brought the romance in us all. Happy Valentines day. Regards Tom

Jan Allison
Date: 2/14/2018 10:36:00 AM

Thanks so much Tom hope you have a wonderful day.:-) hugs jan xx