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Valentine's Day Proposal

Nervous, anxious, praying
my love I express.
Girlfriend blubbers saying 
I’ll marry you - yes!

Parents very happy
we are getting wed,
Bridegroom joyful chappie
banns need to be read!

Joyful girlfriend smiling, 
seals love with a kiss
Planning wedding styling
no longer a ‘miss’!

Booking summer wedding,
bridesmaid will wear blue,
blissful marriage heading
darling I love you!

2/14/18

HAPPY VALENTINES DAY!


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Line Gauthier Date: 4/9/2018 7:22:00 PM Well done, Jan. Congrats on your win. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 4/10/2018 7:06:00 AM Thanks Line:-) hugs Jan xx

Anisha Dutta Date: 3/16/2018 11:44:00 PM Really charming. Congrats JAN to win on your wonderful poem. Love. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 3/17/2018 12:52:00 AM Thanks Anisha:-) hugs Jan x

Eve Roper Date: 3/15/2018 9:58:00 PM Wonderful imagery in your poem, Jan , and written very well. Congratulations on your win! Hugs ~`* Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 3/16/2018 5:14:00 AM Thanks so much Eve:-) hugs Jan xx

Gregory Richard Barden Date: 3/15/2018 9:42:00 PM This is joyous and whimsical, and it brightens my spirit - you are SO good at touching hearts, and I must fav this one! Blessings and congratulations on your wonderful win, Jan - keep up the great work, my friend! :-) <3 Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 3/16/2018 5:14:00 AM aww thanks for the fave Greg, so glad you like it:-) hugs jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 3/14/2018 5:59:00 PM This poem is sheer perfection Jan! I love it! Congratulations on your wonderful win! : ) xxoo Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 3/16/2018 5:13:00 AM aww Thanks Connie, I struggle to write romantic poems so I'm delighted you like it:-) hugs Jan xx

Rhoda Tripp Date: 3/14/2018 4:11:00 PM Beautiful and quite a few emotions expressed here. Very well done. Congratulations1 Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 3/16/2018 5:13:00 AM Thanks Rhoda:-) hugs Jan xx

Gershon Wolf Date: 3/14/2018 10:31:00 AM This is just sooooo sweet, Jan. It captures the innocent joy and anticipation of young lovers marrying, and makes this old phogey want to get married again. I'm showing it to my wife when I get home from work tonight. I bet it rekindles something. Thanks a million!! Congrats on your well-deserved trophy! :) gw Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 3/14/2018 11:35:00 AM aww why not have your vows renewed Gershon:-) hugs jan xx

Heidi Sands Date: 3/14/2018 10:31:00 AM Congratulations for you win Jan :) Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 3/14/2018 11:34:00 AM thanks so much Heidi:-) hugs jan xx

Tom Cunningham Date: 3/14/2018 10:16:00 AM Knew it would be up there Jan. Congratulations. Login to Reply

Richard Lamoureux Date: 2/16/2018 8:57:00 AM I see romance is alive and well. Great job. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 2/17/2018 4:57:00 AM I wrote it on Valentine's day but struggle with romance, much prefer humour :-) hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper Date: 2/15/2018 9:15:00 PM Nicely done, Jan, luck in the contest... Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 2/17/2018 4:54:00 AM Thanks eve;-) hugs Jan xx

Reason A. Poteet Date: 2/14/2018 8:30:00 PM Well-done, Jan. Enjoyable read with minimal words. Valentine's Day engagement, probably been more than a few of those over the years. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 2/15/2018 5:23:00 AM I proposed to my hubby on Valentine's Day and it wasn't even a leap year:-) hugs jan xx

Line Gauthier Date: 2/14/2018 4:56:00 PM Lovely, Jan. A delightful read. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 2/14/2018 4:59:00 PM Thanks Line:-) hugs Jan xx

Alexis Y. Date: 2/14/2018 3:41:00 PM Hi Jan, This a good take on the contest theme. I want to give it a go but it looks challenging but you made it look easy. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. HAPPY VALENTINE'S DAY:-)Alexis Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 2/14/2018 3:47:00 PM I found it quite challenging Alexis - do give it a go:-) hugs Jan xx

Lin Lane Date: 2/14/2018 10:32:00 AM A confection of happiness you've turned out, Jan. On this day for love, it's a sweet one. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 2/14/2018 10:38:00 AM I was inspired by the day - it is actually quite a challenging form:-) hugs jan xx

Tom Cunningham Date: 2/14/2018 9:58:00 AM Beautifully done Jan , today has certainly brought the romance in us all. Happy Valentines day. Regards Tom Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 2/14/2018 10:36:00 AM Thanks so much Tom hope you have a wonderful day.:-) hugs jan xx