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Valentine’s Bridge

There’s a train on the track And it’s not coming back It will plunge far below Nowhere else it can go Up ahead I can see Where the bridge used to be Where the bridge used to be Is a vast cavity * When the train whistle blew On the nine twenty two There were squeals in the night From the wheels locking tight For the train driver knew There was nought he could do And the whole of the town Heard the train crashing down Heard the shrill whistle blow From the wreck down below Heard the screams so afeard Of the dead that they cleared For the train thundered on Upon tracks that were gone And a train without track Simply ain’t coming back * But there’s one day a year When the date brings me here On Saint Valentine’s Day When the train makes its way ’cross the bridge I can see Where the bridge used to be And the train that I see Takes my girl home to me But she won’t find me there For I stepped into air To be with Emily Where the bridge used to be Though on each other day When the train falls away I can hold Emily And she can hold me

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Date: 2/24/2024 7:32:00 AM
Awww Terry. How can you entwine humor with sweetness? You do it seamlessly and in such a perfect way! I enjoyed this one a lot. :)
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Terry Flood
Date: 2/24/2024 2:58:00 PM
Thanks, Linda. A different approach to Valentine’s Day, perhaps… but hey… I had a train going begging.
Date: 2/17/2024 12:45:00 PM
WOW!!! What a wonderful write/story with a great ending. Have a wonderful day/week to come...............
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Date: 2/17/2024 2:50:00 PM
I’ll never have any complaints about a comment that begins with “WOW!!!”. Thanks so much, Paula.
Date: 2/15/2024 6:40:00 PM
Simply -- a classic, Terry. FAVE for me. Thanks, gw
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Terry Flood
Date: 2/16/2024 4:37:00 PM
Thanks for the fave, Gw. Much appreciated. Terry
Date: 2/14/2024 11:48:00 PM
A sad yet beautiful story/poem Terry, a Valentine’s Day special, marvellous. Beryl
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Terry Flood
Date: 2/16/2024 4:41:00 PM
Thanks, Beryl. Thought I’d approach Valentines Day from a different angle. My barely formed train story came in handy after all. Terry
Date: 2/14/2024 6:27:00 AM
aww gee, Terry. You found the right day to mold this tale around. It's a goosebump maker. Your train has found direction at your hands. Enjoy Valentine's Day with your Emily.
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Terry Flood
Date: 2/14/2024 7:44:00 AM
Thanks, Lin. Glad you enjoyed this. I had a couple of stanzas which I really liked but nothing more. I still prefer my original first stanza… alas it didn’t quite fit with the eventual unfolding story. Terry
Date: 2/13/2024 8:29:00 PM
You are a great storyteller! I enjoyed reading this.
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Terry Flood
Date: 2/14/2024 5:43:00 AM
Thank you, Karen. It’s nice to have it finally finished as it’s been loitering unfinished for weeks. ;-)
Date: 2/13/2024 5:09:00 PM
Wow! Awesome....a powerful and poignant story you told, Terry. I'm impressed and wasn't expecting that outcome. You have a special kind of poetic voice and it shines through in the lines of this poem. have a great evening, Sara PS am faving
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Terry Flood
Date: 2/14/2024 5:42:00 AM
Thank you, Sara. I’ve been tinkering with this for an age but didn’t know where to take it. Then, with nothing else in mind to mark Valentine’s Day, suddenly it had a little direction. Truly appreciate the FAVE.

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