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Valentine Rendezvous

Through gossamer dark, to the moon I look Piercing ink-splattered sky, a spot of bright Reflecting your face in the pewter brook Guided by the script of your hand I took We journeyed far to rendezvous this night Through gossamer dark, to the moon I look Your letters of love completing this book I follow our path by memory's sight Reflecting your face in the pewter brook In sharp chilling gusts, ivory leaves shook Compelled to conquer this mountain's cold height Through gossamer dark, to the moon I look Of pristine crystal water I partook Visions redeemed within silken starlight Reflecting your face in the pewter brook Bruised steps lifted me to your hidden nook My valentine, you made the labor light Through gossamer dark, to the moon I look Reflecting your face in the pewter brook. 1/26/19 for Midnight Valentine contest Sponsor: Chantelle Anne Cooke

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Date: 2/4/2019 6:59:00 AM
What a wonderous book you wrote, and this poem belongs in the center pressed against a mulberry rose. I loved your entry Michelle. Congratulations, xo
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 2/4/2019 12:10:00 PM
Thank you for such a thoughtful comment, very sweet of you!
Date: 1/27/2019 8:50:00 AM
Poetic romance at its best,,love it.
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 1/27/2019 3:16:00 PM
Thanks for your comment, appreciate it!
Date: 1/26/2019 11:57:00 PM
Hi Michelle, This is beautiful and romantic. It's a good entry for the contest theme. I wish the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 1/27/2019 12:35:00 AM
Thank you, Alexis, so glad you enjoyed it!
Date: 1/26/2019 8:46:00 PM
Can't say it any better than CayCay (dropdown): "Absolutely beautiful and captivating." Excellence in poesy, Michelle! Best wishes, Gershon
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 1/27/2019 12:33:00 AM
Thank you, I so appreciate your thoughtful comment, Gershon!
Date: 1/26/2019 8:03:00 PM
wow, I like how you even took it at midnight, like the contest's moonlight title. That well inspired you, Michelle.
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 1/27/2019 12:32:00 AM
Yes I was inspired by the 'Midnight Valentine' theme-
Date: 1/26/2019 8:00:00 PM
This is absolutely beautiful and captivating. Love the wording in each sentence of impressive imagery. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 1/27/2019 12:30:00 AM
I am so flattered by your wonderful comments, CayCay!
Date: 1/26/2019 5:40:00 PM
Beautiful Villanelle, Michelle. Nicely done, with exactly the right amount of romance and exquisiteness.
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 1/27/2019 12:29:00 AM
Thank you, Caren, so kind of you!

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