Valentine Queen

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Sweetly sailing through deep seas building a castle from out of the sands mirror reflections fluttering diamonds speak From one little spark igniting light becoming a fiery particle burning from the glint within Through the passage of time flashing visions of a dream when a moon kissed the sun crowns

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/15/2018 12:33:00 PM

- Beautiful Valentine poem, Liam - (My Valentine poem have the same title :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Donna Loughman

Date: 2/15/2018 12:15:00 PM

“flashing visions of a dream when a moon kissed the sun crowns” fabulous imagery...Well done my friend :-)

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 2/14/2018 10:17:00 AM

Hi Liam!:))Wow!This is the most very beautiful romantic tender sweet n' captivating love poem you've written here my dearest friend Liam.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!Another very beautiful,sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.I love it!A most very beautiful heartfelt romantic dreamy heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet! Just wonderful!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem.Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + +!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful romantic gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray alot you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^