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Vanish, Voyage, Veiled, Vagabond Words - Poetry Contest, 

Constance La France, sponsor,

submitted 3/30/2024

“A truly strong person does not need the approval of others any more than a lion needs the approval of sheep.” (quote by Miyamoto Musashi, author of Vagabond, a Japanese historical fiction manga series based on the life of legendary swordsman Miyamoto Musashi and his journey of self-discovery as he seeks to perfect his swordsmanship and achieve a higher understanding of the world.)
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ They're here for just a short time Long enough to recite their lines ~Poetic Vagabonds~ Out to hitch a ride From the rhyme as it passes by ~Poetic Vagabonds~ Hopping into the front seat Before the poem pulls out to leave ~Poetic Vagabonds~ Weaving along roads of rhyme Without regard for the passage of time ~Poetic Vagabonds~ They go unheeded as the stream Without a care, it would seem ~Poetic Vagabonds~ Writing with affection alliteratively Using metaphors and similes creatively ~Poetic Vagabonds~ Willing to let the world go by, With valor in their kindling eye ~Poetic Vagabonds~ Living with joy supreme, with heart sublime, Restless are they, these sojourners of time ~Poetic Vagabonds~ Between the lines you will read What could be their basic need ~Poetic Vagabonds~ Do treat these poets gently Such a fragile entity ~Poetic Vagabonds~

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Date: 4/7/2024 11:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your creative/fun "Vagabond" writessssss. Great picture... Have a blessed day writing away...........
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Date: 4/2/2024 5:57:00 PM
Poetic vagabonds. Love it. Always a fun read with you Sara.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 4/2/2024 5:58:00 PM
aww, thank you for your visit and your kind comments. Have a great evening, Sara
Date: 3/31/2024 12:27:00 AM
Good Morning Sara., I'm yet again lost for words by your poem, every word is simply stunningly beautiful . Daniel
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/31/2024 5:13:00 AM
Hi Daniel...thanks for complimentary words--they left me breathless. You made my day :-) hugs, Sara
Date: 3/30/2024 4:09:00 PM
Dear Sara, I am captivated by the exquisite beauty that your poem captures, reflecting the very essence of poetry. It captures the essence of poets as wanderers, embarking on a captivating journey through the mysteries of meter and rhythm. The imagery of wandering poets gracefully stepping into the spotlight of a passing poem and deftly maneuvering through the intricate paths of verse is incredibly vivid and evocative. This vivid imagery acts as a powerful reminder of the fleeting essence of the creative process and the timeless pursuit of conveying one's deepest emotions through the written word.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/30/2024 5:29:00 PM
thank you, kind Sotto, for your in depth understanding of my poem. I was hoping to capture the essence of poets and poetry. So I'm grateful for your words. I believe poets are wandering souls who are willing to journey into unknown spaces and grab ahold of creativity. Thanks for your enthusiastic and supportive comments. Hope your days are returning to 'normal' after your time away. Have a blessed evening, your poetess friend in Texas, Sara
Date: 3/30/2024 3:52:00 PM
How nice of you to empathize with them in your poem- flowed great!
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/30/2024 5:29:00 PM
awww, thank you. Paige. Your most kind. Have a great evening, hugs, Sara
Date: 3/30/2024 3:31:00 PM
Poetic vagabonds, that hold a treasure in their hearts and hands, I really think you did an amazing job putting this together, skillfully and full of talent, gl in the contest Sara ,
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/30/2024 5:30:00 PM
awww, your comments are kind and uplifting, dearest Rose. I appreciate your visit. Happy Easter to you and yours, hugs, Sara
Date: 3/30/2024 10:34:00 AM
I love this! Fave!
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/30/2024 5:30:00 PM
thanks, Kim, for your comments & I'm humbly grateful for the fave. Happy Easter, blessings, Sara
Date: 3/30/2024 10:23:00 AM
Nice poem portraying poets as vagabonds. Nice metaphors and imagery.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/30/2024 5:31:00 PM
thanks for your visit, Jay, and for your complimentary words. Always grateful that you stop by. Have a pleasant evening, Sara
Date: 3/30/2024 8:49:00 AM
Hi Sara, Lovely! "Poetic Vagabonds" portrays poets who embrace the journey of life with a carefree spirit and passionate heart, crafting their poetry without concern for time's passage. These poets live in the moment, their creativity fueled by life's fleeting nature, suggesting that their true need lies in the freedom to express and explore the endless roads of rhyme and reason. Hope you are enjoying your holiday weekend. ~Don
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/30/2024 5:34:00 PM
thank you, Don, for your visiting and for your comments--words that tell me you understood the message I hoped to convey. I believe your right--a poet's deepest need is for freedom not just to explore the endless roads but also to explore mankind's inner workings. Grateful for you and your in depth understanding of my poem. Have a great evening, Sara
Date: 3/30/2024 6:30:00 AM
Your poem gives voice to poetic minds on a journey--Weaving along roads of rhyme Without regard for the passage of time--as you say. The repeating line enhances the essence of your poem, Sara.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/30/2024 5:32:00 PM
thank you, Vijay. Your words tell me that I accomplished what I'd hoped to do with this poem. Thank you! Wishing you a splendid evening, Sara
Date: 3/30/2024 6:11:00 AM
I love how your poem beautifully captures the essence of the poetic spirit, portraying poets as wanderers on a journey through the realms of rhyme and verse. The imagery of "Poetic Vagabonds" hopping onto the front seat of a passing poem and weaving along roads of rhyme is vivid and evocative. It speaks to the fleeting nature of creativity and the timeless pursuit of expressing oneself through words.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/30/2024 6:16:00 AM
awww, thank you for stopping by and for your encouraging words. I'm grateful you saw the intent and deep message in my words. You're the best! Honestly. Have a splendid weekend, Sara

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