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so slowly - I have traveled this way before crept along this route with deliberate intention allowing myself the enjoyments that each next measure brings savoring the odyssey as if for the first time … that mindset - allowing me the discovery around each bend of sensations, new and inspiring each twist and turn offering a new reveal a perspective or feeling or taste that my previous numberless journeys lacked how many roads - do we travel in life? some over-and-over, in haste and those footsteps, retraced, so often taken for granted the world bustling by our window without notice or regard yet - each time I make THIS sojourn it reveals something fresh and wondrous a tremor, a flavor, an aromatic scent, heavenly feelings, sights, thoughts, even sounds, anew that my previous courses missed but, oh my - this adventure! never again shall I take a centimeter of this trek as a given for it is the wandering that matters oh, the destination holds wonders of its own but - this sublime adventure is never to be hurried for it is made on a vista, divine a landscape of unequaled beauty and breadth that unfolds before me in amazement and portent the sugary softness and voluptuous indulgence ... inside - your thigh. ~ 1st Place ~ in the "Strand Choice 12 Any Form Any Theme" Poetry Contest, Brian Strand, Judge & Sponsor.

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Date: 2/5/2020 8:50:00 AM
Greg, congratulations on your win in the contest with this wonderful write _Constance
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 6/14/2020 2:19:00 AM
That's very kind, Constance, thanks so much! <3
Date: 2/2/2020 11:43:00 AM
Hi Gregory, Congratulations on your top placement.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 6/14/2020 2:19:00 AM
Thank you very much Sam! :o)
Date: 2/2/2020 11:08:00 AM
The picture gave the clue right from the start, with climactic confirmation at the end. Brilliant sensual writing, Gregory.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 6/14/2020 2:19:00 AM
Many kind thanks, Geoffrey, it is so greatly appreciated, my friend! :o)
Date: 2/1/2020 4:41:00 PM
Excellent poem, Greg:-) Definitely one of the best poems you've written this year, IMO. Heartiest congrats on your top win!
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Date: 7/18/2018 7:16:00 PM
This is such a great write, Greg! I read it once, then twice, then a third time. Each time was better! Just awesome!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 7/20/2018 7:32:00 PM
That's very kind of you to say, Charles, and I'm so pleased you enjoyed this one ... it is a favorite of mine! Blessings, my friend! :-)
Date: 7/11/2018 2:31:00 PM
Gregory, I didn't connect the picture and the poem together because I was excited to read your poem. When I got to the end it was a delightful surprise which made me read it all over again with new eyes. Wonderfully romantic! : )
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 7/11/2018 10:22:00 PM
Thank you so much, Connie, and that was one of my intents when writing it - to get the reader to go back and see it differently ... I LOVE to create those layers and ambiguities - so much fun! I haven't been writing for the joy of it lately, (mostly for contests), and I need to get back to that. Blessings, My Dear Poet Friend! :-) <3
Date: 7/11/2018 2:41:00 AM
For that kind of journey one needs a big walking stick:) Great build up and then the dagger. Wonderful, suspenseful, and most entertaining. Another beauty Greg.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 7/11/2018 10:19:00 PM
LOL - I'm not going to touch that one, my friend, but you gave me a chuckle, (much needed) ... so pleased you enjoyed it, Dan - blessings to you! :-)

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