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Tender the moment
of an empty cup that waits
more so patiently
to feel the warmth of aqua
and taste the lure of caffeine. Date: 06/09/2019 *Syllable Counter checked 5-7-5-7-7

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Date: 6/9/2019 11:45:00 PM
The lure of caffeine is certainly alive and well at my house. In caffeine's honor I accept this poem.
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Date: 6/10/2019 12:06:00 AM
LOL, midnight, soon to refill Caren, Aloha William

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