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Vacation a La Mode

here and there up and down this way and that way party brains in motion loose and on vacation set wild and free heads a’bobbing to the beat of dance music on and on and on no end in sight when morning comes painful will be the price to pay AP: 3rd place 2020 Posted on October 27, 2019

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Date: 10/31/2019 6:11:00 AM
I am enjoying the vicarious feeling I get with this one.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 10/31/2019 8:09:00 AM
Thanks, Caren. A holiday inside our head.
Date: 10/30/2019 1:34:00 PM
Once loved dancing the night way. So exhilarating. Drinking' no! Just love dance! Great poem PR
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Line Gauthier
Date: 10/30/2019 6:42:00 PM
My poem doesn't reflect my lifestyle. LOL
Date: 10/28/2019 5:26:00 AM
Ah, we all do it once in a while, we need to relax somehow. nice poem. Have a great day Line .
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Date: 10/28/2019 9:05:00 AM
LOL thanks, Pixie.
Date: 10/27/2019 8:38:00 PM
Yup... best perhaps to dance the night away and just sleep off the whole morning. Then you wake up in the afternoon, and YES! you're 'home free.' ~ Hung over in Hanover
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Line Gauthier
Date: 10/27/2019 10:39:00 PM
LOL just a fun write.
Date: 10/27/2019 5:48:00 PM
Line, Party on Garth! Party on Wayne, Party on Line! -Richard
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Date: 10/27/2019 10:40:00 PM
LOL gotcha. Too funny. Just a fun write (not a lifestyle).

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