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Vacancy

For years, it has stood along the highway. This was a place for many an overnight stay. In winters cold and summers hot, this was often a convivial spot. In the office, the desk clerk would hand you a key. There were always clean sheets and a TV. Sometimes, it was a rest stop on a long journey. Many times, a customer could be a hustling honey. Anyone could book a room if they had money. Often, the sign would light saying “NO VACANCY” However, just an empty shell exists today. All the living souls have gone away. If the walls could talk, I wonder what they would say?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 1/16/2012 9:25:00 AM
What they would say? Wonderful sight penned. Nicely penned, enjoyed, bl
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Date: 1/15/2012 8:39:00 PM
I really enjoyed this one about a vacant motel. YOu could even have made the motel talk. Oh, what those walls would say!! One of your best, Robert, and I'm so glad you liked that one sonnet. I just posted a new one for the love contest. It's one I wanted to try where not only does it rhyme on the end of the alternating lines, but on the front of them as well. ok, I'm OUTTA here. It's been a long day with poetrysoup. Luv, Andrea
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