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Written for the contest sponsored by Constance La france

“Love, is a prompt, that utterly inspires the sleepless stars above grieving grass, so let the wind and waves be the music to the heart that longs in euphonious silence.” ~ By the Poet
The quartz moon has seen your silent scribbles, and how I'm utterly drenched in teal~ seas of stardust, where silhouette of sky floats across turquoise torrents of temptations, while like the sun I rise to embrace magnolia memoirs. For hope still flies on paper- wings of a gold horse carousel, as~ your voice remains my muse that ignites flickering flames growing within my love-struck art, yet I question sleepless stars in your eyes, what is life without skies sprinkling sage~ upon restless reflections strolling through carmine tunnels of my hibiscus heart, hypnotized and lost within the mellifluous rhythm that echoes from rose-wood flutes of forever played with sapphire tuned serenades from pearl bliss. So let me sing verses woven with deep indigo ink to lure those amethyst-stringed butterflies fluttering dreams, above your midnight meadows sketched in hues of honey-glazed emeralds~ mirroring sealed lips with enthralling wreaths.

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Date: 4/7/2024 3:20:00 PM
Ink, congratulations on your win in my contest with this impressive poem, I like the quote too, hugs
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Date: 3/28/2024 2:23:00 PM
- Congratulations on your win in the contest, Ink :) - Have a lovely Easter :) - hugs
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Date: 3/26/2024 11:28:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I love your "Utterly" Etheree write/great quote. What a fun shape you have made with your words... Enjoy your day/win..............
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Date: 3/26/2024 8:54:00 AM
Ooh, a shape poem in the form of Etheree. Brilliant my dear Inky! Congratulations! :)
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Date: 3/25/2024 3:21:00 PM
This is gorgeous, amazing art. I love the metaphor of sealed lips with enthralling wreaths. BEAUTIFUL.
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Date: 3/23/2024 6:36:00 AM
IE, Seems like there is a lot of melancholy in this write. What strikes me is the desire to have love and affection...and the way you describe this in such pervasive and ethereal terms. The longing stops me in my tracks and makes me think about love through these beautiful words, colors, and images.
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Date: 3/23/2024 12:12:00 PM
Dear duke what a kind and thoughtful comment this is, i am grateful always for your generous and sincere support truly, thank you so very much
Date: 3/22/2024 8:26:00 PM
"hope still flies on paper- wings of a gold horse carousel, as~ your voice remains my muse that ignites flickering flames growing within my love-struck art," Love to see hope rising in you and flickering flames of romance are aroused in you. So happy to see you back after a short break to stun us once again with your flawless art. Beautiful Etheree.....dear Empress. Whatever you touch, turns into gold. You are well-versed in all poetic forms. "So let me sing verses woven with deep indigo ink to lure those amethyst-stringed butterflies fluttering dreams," Beautiful dear friend! All the Best.
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Date: 3/23/2024 12:33:00 PM
Thank you sweet valsa, your comments always make my day! I appreciate your support truly. You are such a kind and sincere soul, im truly grateful to receive your poetic support truly. Sending you light always
Date: 3/22/2024 5:39:00 PM
Very creative Etheree, Inky. As usual, your imagery was a pure delight to read. A favorite line for me would be, "For hope still flies on paper-wings of a gold horse carousel". Thanks for sharing your soulful poetry with us, my dear friend. Bill
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Date: 3/23/2024 12:34:00 PM
Dear bill i am so grateful for your support and kindness. Truly, appreciate you support always
Date: 3/22/2024 5:01:00 PM
Now you've gone and totally wowed me with this beautifully constructed and creative double/double? Etheree! What compelling imagery and alliterative lines--lines that flowed oh so flawlessly. I especially liked: butterflies fluttering dreams, above your midnight meadows sketched.." Best wishes with the contest...great to see your poetic voice today, hugs & have a great evening, Sara
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Date: 3/23/2024 12:39:00 PM
Wow thats so sweet dear sara, how kind of you to say that, i am truly touched by your response, sending you light always beautiful soul
Date: 3/22/2024 3:22:00 PM
You form your poetry with great creativity, and the words are so inviting, thank you for sharing your talent dear poet friend, have a great day !
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Date: 3/23/2024 12:50:00 PM
Thank you dear rose, I appreciate always your poetic support. You are such a kind soul
Date: 3/22/2024 2:56:00 PM
Creative design made from the Etheree poetry form. Way to go. Thanks for sharing it with us. Sara K
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Date: 3/23/2024 12:53:00 PM
Thank you dear sara, i appreciate your support always
Date: 3/22/2024 12:33:00 PM
Nice quote, I see you used one of your own, I did the same for my poem for this contest.. This is quite an amazing take on the word 'utterly; which is simple, but your poem is a metaphorical masterpiece done in a poetic way using the etheree form.. Also a double double etheree.. I guess you call it quadruple... so many great poetic lines of yearning for the one you love and you have adorned it beautiful imagery.. so romantic and effervescent.. Best of luck in the contest..
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Date: 3/23/2024 12:54:00 PM
Yes i did use one of my own in last one too, i appreciate always your support. Yes quadruple lol. Im so happy you liked it. Means alot coming from you silent one
Date: 3/22/2024 12:11:00 PM
A stunning creation, my friend. A tremendous effort you invested to weave emotions into this form--though you make it look easy and effortless because of your poetic prowess. --let me sing verses woven with deep indigo ink to lure those amethyst-stringed butterflies fluttering dreams, above your midnight meadows sketched in hues of honey-glazed emeralds--simply beautiful! A FAVE!
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Date: 3/23/2024 12:55:00 PM
Ah im so grateful for your fave and support truly dear vijay. Thank you so very much always for being so supportive and for understanding my poems, im grateful
Date: 3/22/2024 11:15:00 AM
Dear Empress, This is such a breathtaking journey through the depths of love and longing. The imagery artistically created with words mesmerizes, evoking emotions that fill the soul. I loved how each line is a passionate expression, piecing together a symphony of love and artistry. Your words are the power of love to inspire and ignite the soul, leaving an indelible imprint on the heart. Indeed, Empress, your poetic prowess knows no bounds. A Fav! - Blessings, Daniel
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Date: 3/23/2024 12:57:00 PM
Dear daniel, im always so very grateful for your comments and faves and also how sincerely you interpret and analyse my poems. Means alot truly. Thank you so very much for your generous support
Date: 3/22/2024 9:30:00 AM
Dearest Inky, I am totally mesmerized by this rainbow of romantic delight, the way you meld words into a dreamy verse of sounds and alliteration all bound together in a wonderful metaphor flowing from your pen. Pretty awesome my friend! Pure poetic "enthrall." Blessings to you! Samzy~
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Date: 3/23/2024 1:02:00 PM
Awwn thank you sweet samszy. Appreciate you so very much always , whenever u visit, makes my day! You are a ray of light. Sending you light too
Date: 3/22/2024 9:00:00 AM
Beautiful setting to an exceptional poem, IE, Kelli
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Date: 3/23/2024 1:02:00 PM
Awwn how sweet kelli i appreciate you talented soul
Date: 3/22/2024 5:36:00 AM
Beautiful tripler inky. Keep singing those poetic verses to your lover Mr. Moon, and anyone else who has the privilege of being on your list. Have a great weekend!
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Date: 3/23/2024 1:05:00 PM
Awwn thank you so much. Hah. Yes mr moon inspired this one. As always lol grateful always for your support
Date: 3/22/2024 3:50:00 AM
This etheree is gorgeous papi.. quartz moon has seen your silent scribbles, and how I'm utterly drenched in teal… mmmm soo enchanting .. sun I rise to embrace magnolia memoirs… your voice remains my muse that ignites flickering flames.. you too aee papi .. my kundalini muse!!! hypnotized and lost within the mellifluous rhythm that echoes from rose-wood flutes… oooo the architecture of that is gorgeous.. So let me sing verses woven with deep indigo ink… mmm..hues of honey-glazed emeralds.. absolutely beautiful
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Date: 3/23/2024 1:06:00 PM
Papi arent u the kindest thank u
Date: 3/22/2024 3:41:00 AM
Beautiful éthérée. Enjoyed reading it so much .. love it
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Date: 3/23/2024 1:06:00 PM
Thank u dahlin twinszy

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