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Written - 16th March 2024

Unadorned, Utopia, Utterly, Uplifting, Poetry Contest

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Constance La France

Date: 4/7/2024 3:12:00 PM

Beryl, congratulations on your win in my contest with this outstanding poem, I like the quote too, hugs

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 4/7/2024 5:29:00 PM

Thank you so much Constance, I enjoyed writing for your contest, well done to all poets who entered too, the poems were all wonderful… Beryl

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/28/2024 2:09:00 PM

- Congratulations on your top win in the contest, Beryl :) - Have a lovely Easter :) - hugs

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 4/7/2024 5:24:00 PM

Thank you very much Anne-Lise. Blessings, Beryl

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/26/2024 10:41:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. I love your "Utopia" write/picture/quote. Please send address. I want to move... Enjoy your day/win..............

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 3/26/2024 11:03:00 AM

Ha Paula, that made me laugh, address in the post. Thank you, Beryl

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 3/26/2024 7:08:00 AM

What a dream dear Beryl! I love your quote as well. :) Congratulations on your win! :)

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 3/26/2024 11:02:00 AM

Thank you Linda, it is a dream, but not impossible, maybe one day… Beryl

Daniel Caplin

Date: 3/25/2024 11:32:00 PM

Hi Beryl , congratulations on your First, I would like to think the majority share your wonderful hopes and dreams, beautiful words so eloquently arranged. Daniel

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 3/26/2024 10:55:00 AM

Thank you Daniel, I believe most people share the hope and dream of there being peace on earth, if only. I truly, appreciate your comments… Beryl

I Am Anaya

Date: 3/25/2024 9:25:00 PM

Dear Beryl, we can only hope so. Love is the answer, it always has been. A land of plenty, unity, harmony! Powerfully penned. Congratulations on your First Placement Beryl! :) Fav

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 3/26/2024 10:48:00 AM

So right you are Anaya, love is all we need. Thank you :) Beryl

Valsa George

Date: 3/20/2024 11:19:00 PM

Hi Beryl, your beautifully rhyming poem on utopia unravels all that we can hope for in an ideal world. I enjoyed reading it a lot. Utopia may be unattainable. Still, we can dream of such a blissful state where love abounds, peace stays and all live in prosperity and brotherhood. It is dreams that give wings to our life.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 3/26/2024 10:45:00 AM

Thank you Valsa, “It is dreams that give wings to our life” I like that line you wrote in the reply. We can but dream for bliss on earth, one day the dream will come true… Beryl

Tom Woody

Date: 3/20/2024 12:53:00 PM

Well, the last comment I made on Utopia got ridiculed. Let me just say I believe in it with my whole heart, soul and mind. Only Jesus can make it happen. Awesome poem

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 3/20/2024 1:08:00 PM

So right you are Tom, only God and His Son can put the world to right. Thank you, Beryl

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 3/20/2024 10:14:00 AM

We are always dreaming of Utopia. It is our wish to live there. in peace and quiet.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 3/20/2024 11:00:00 AM

One day our dream will come true, we can live in hope. Thank you again Victor… Beryl

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 3/20/2024 2:59:00 AM

Hi my friend Beryl, This is a perfect poem written in desperate hope for a perfect world. I hear your plea and I agree with you one hundred fold, but first I believe, the greed of mankind should somehow be dealt with, maybe Socialism is the answer. I would love a debate on this subject. I admire you choice of diverse subjects that you always pick to write about. Kudos Beryl. Hugs and love Jennifer.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 3/20/2024 11:18:00 AM

Hi dear Jennifer, I agree greed should dealt with, when there are people starving in the world, why not share. Hugs and love returned, thank you… Beryl

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 3/18/2024 11:29:00 AM

You wrote a very positive poem. We yearn for such bright days.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 3/20/2024 11:01:00 AM

Thank you Victor, bright days are on the way, I pray… Beryl

Silpika Kalita

Date: 3/17/2024 7:36:00 AM

Such a wonderful penning on the evergreen topic. Each stanza has its own indepth essence. A blessed and blissful read

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 3/20/2024 11:03:00 AM

Thank you so much Silpika, I truly appreciate your comments… Beryl

Silent One

Date: 3/17/2024 7:16:00 AM

Awesome take on the contest and great rhymes as always.. Your poem is a poignant expression of hope and longing for a better world, a world where peace, abundance, and harmony prevail. Its evocative imagery and heartfelt sentiment invite readers to reflect on their own vision of utopia and to join in the poet's prayer for a brighter future for all humanity.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 3/20/2024 11:14:00 AM

Thank you so much Silent One, if we all hope and pray, maybe one day utopia will be normality… Beryl

Marugu Mo

Date: 3/17/2024 2:51:00 AM

someone did an analysis of whether the worlds resources are able to support the entire population and found it absolutely possible, the only problem is greed and individualism. I think at some point humanity will have to change its mind on how it approaches life and living. I hope we get to this utopia. Well written

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 3/20/2024 11:08:00 AM

I hope we get to utopia too Mo, I’m pleased to read that the world can support the world wide population. All we need is love, compassion and peace. Thank you, Beryl

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 3/16/2024 6:48:00 PM

Dear Beryl, What a beautiful vision of a world filled with love, peace, and harmony. Your words shows us of the simple yet profound ideals that we all aspire to. I love how your heartfelt expression of hope for a better world inspires us to join hands and work towards creating a future where kindness and compassion reign supreme. Beryl this is so uplifting and powerful message through your poetry. - Blessings, Daniel

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 3/16/2024 7:33:00 PM

Daniel thank you for your delightful, encouraging review, your words touch my heart, you are so kind and thoughtful, a joy bringer. Blessings in return… Beryl

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 3/16/2024 5:59:00 PM

Beryl this is a great the flow is perfect its a plane many long to be hugs Shadow

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 3/16/2024 6:18:00 PM

Thank you so much Shadow, truly appreciated. Hugs sent right back, Beryl

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 3/16/2024 5:32:00 PM

I'd love to live in the Utopia you described. I especially liked 'Utopia would be hands across the sea." I agree...and also 'hands across our country' (It's so divisive right now.) A pleasant read for me. have a great evening, hugs, Sara

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 3/16/2024 5:39:00 PM

Thank you Sara, bad things are happening here too, it’s so unsettling wondering what the future will bring. Have a happy Sunday… Beryl

David Fisher

Date: 3/16/2024 4:22:00 PM

Love your poetic description on that longed for place. I think you hit all the high points, and where do we sign up.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 3/16/2024 4:29:00 PM

Hi David, sending a huge thank you, you ask where do we sigh up, I believe we write it in stars, a good place for to start… Beryl

Deb M

Date: 3/16/2024 2:18:00 PM

Belle ,Belle, Belle What a simply beautiful poem full of peace, kindness, unity and loveliness! A real feel good poem straight from your loving heart! Loved it!!! Debx

Deb M
Date: 3/16/2024 4:18:00 PM

You seem like such a lovely sweet person Belle….l am glad my words made you feel good! Cuddles….Debx

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 3/16/2024 2:22:00 PM

Deb, thank you, so, so, so much, those words have made me feel good. Beryl xx

Jan Allison

Date: 3/16/2024 2:00:00 PM

oh if only the world could be like this Beryl, it is such scary times we live in now and there seems to be no end to the conflicts. hugs jan xx

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 3/16/2024 2:20:00 PM

Yes, wouldn’t it be loverly. Thanks Jan, hugs returned, Beryl xx

Utopia

Written - 16th March 2024

Unadorned, Utopia, Utterly, Uplifting, Poetry Contest

Sponsored by: Constance La France

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