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Written - 16th March 2024
Unadorned, Utopia, Utterly, Uplifting, Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Constance La France 

 

Utopia

Life should be about happy dancing, living, loving and romancing.
Quote - Poet’s own
Utopia would be a world at peace Where there is no war and all conflicts cease With all folk having a place to call home streets and all places being safe to roam. Utopia would be land of plenty No one having a cupboard that’s empty Where all people were loving and giving And there was never need of forgiving. Utopia would be world unity Freedom to be what one wishes to be A place where earthly creatures large or small Aren’t being hunted for profit at all. Utopia would be same as a bird Never having to hear an angry word Free and never being locked up in chains No tears falling for fears and no constrains. Utopia would be hands across sea Joined together in world wide harmony One day I pray that my dream will come true Brothers and sisters come pray with me too.
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La France Avatar
April 7, 2024 at 3:12 PM
Beryl, congratulations on your win in my contest with this outstanding poem, I like the quote too, hugs
Edmonds  Avatar
April 7, 2024 at 5:29 PM
Thank you so much Constance, I enjoyed writing for your contest, well done to all poets who entered too, the poems were all wonderful… Beryl
Andresen Avatar
March 28, 2024 at 2:09 PM
- Congratulations on your top win in the contest, Beryl :) - Have a lovely Easter :) - hugs
Edmonds  Avatar
April 7, 2024 at 5:24 PM
Thank you very much Anne-Lise. Blessings, Beryl
Goldsmith Avatar
March 26, 2024 at 10:41 AM
Congratulations on your win. I love your "Utopia" write/picture/quote. Please send address. I want to move... Enjoy your day/win..............
Edmonds  Avatar
March 26, 2024 at 11:03 AM
Ha Paula, that made me laugh, address in the post. Thank you, Beryl
Fowler Avatar
March 26, 2024 at 7:08 AM
What a dream dear Beryl! I love your quote as well. :) Congratulations on your win! :)
Edmonds  Avatar
March 26, 2024 at 11:02 AM
Thank you Linda, it is a dream, but not impossible, maybe one day… Beryl
Anaya Avatar
March 25, 2024 at 9:25 PM
Dear Beryl, we can only hope so. Love is the answer, it always has been. A land of plenty, unity, harmony! Powerfully penned. Congratulations on your First Placement Beryl! :) Fav
Edmonds  Avatar
March 26, 2024 at 10:48 AM
So right you are Anaya, love is all we need. Thank you :) Beryl
George Avatar
March 20, 2024 at 11:19 PM
Hi Beryl, your beautifully rhyming poem on utopia unravels all that we can hope for in an ideal world. I enjoyed reading it a lot. Utopia may be unattainable. Still, we can dream of such a blissful state where love abounds, peace stays and all live in prosperity and brotherhood. It is dreams that give wings to our life.
Edmonds  Avatar
March 26, 2024 at 10:45 AM
Thank you Valsa, “It is dreams that give wings to our life” I like that line you wrote in the reply. We can but dream for bliss on earth, one day the dream will come true… Beryl
Buhagiar Avatar
March 20, 2024 at 10:14 AM
We are always dreaming of Utopia. It is our wish to live there. in peace and quiet.
Edmonds  Avatar
March 20, 2024 at 11:00 AM
One day our dream will come true, we can live in hope. Thank you again Victor… Beryl
Proxenos Avatar
March 20, 2024 at 2:59 AM
Hi my friend Beryl, This is a perfect poem written in desperate hope for a perfect world. I hear your plea and I agree with you one hundred fold, but first I believe, the greed of mankind should somehow be dealt with, maybe Socialism is the answer. I would love a debate on this subject. I admire you choice of diverse subjects that you always pick to write about. Kudos Beryl. Hugs and love Jennifer.
Edmonds  Avatar
March 20, 2024 at 11:18 AM
Hi dear Jennifer, I agree greed should dealt with, when there are people starving in the world, why not share. Hugs and love returned, thank you… Beryl
Buhagiar Avatar
March 18, 2024 at 11:29 AM
You wrote a very positive poem. We yearn for such bright days.
Edmonds  Avatar
March 20, 2024 at 11:01 AM
Thank you Victor, bright days are on the way, I pray… Beryl
Kalita Avatar
March 17, 2024 at 7:36 AM
Such a wonderful penning on the evergreen topic. Each stanza has its own indepth essence. A blessed and blissful read
Edmonds  Avatar
March 20, 2024 at 11:03 AM
Thank you so much Silpika, I truly appreciate your comments… Beryl
One Avatar
March 17, 2024 at 7:16 AM
Awesome take on the contest and great rhymes as always.. Your poem is a poignant expression of hope and longing for a better world, a world where peace, abundance, and harmony prevail. Its evocative imagery and heartfelt sentiment invite readers to reflect on their own vision of utopia and to join in the poet's prayer for a brighter future for all humanity.
Edmonds  Avatar
March 20, 2024 at 11:14 AM
Thank you so much Silent One, if we all hope and pray, maybe one day utopia will be normality… Beryl
Mo Avatar
March 17, 2024 at 2:51 AM
someone did an analysis of whether the worlds resources are able to support the entire population and found it absolutely possible, the only problem is greed and individualism. I think at some point humanity will have to change its mind on how it approaches life and living. I hope we get to this utopia. Well written
Edmonds  Avatar
March 20, 2024 at 11:08 AM
I hope we get to utopia too Mo, I’m pleased to read that the world can support the world wide population. All we need is love, compassion and peace. Thank you, Beryl
Rodgers Avatar
March 16, 2024 at 6:48 PM
Dear Beryl, What a beautiful vision of a world filled with love, peace, and harmony. Your words shows us of the simple yet profound ideals that we all aspire to. I love how your heartfelt expression of hope for a better world inspires us to join hands and work towards creating a future where kindness and compassion reign supreme. Beryl this is so uplifting and powerful message through your poetry. - Blessings, Daniel
Edmonds  Avatar
March 16, 2024 at 7:33 PM
Daniel thank you for your delightful, encouraging review, your words touch my heart, you are so kind and thoughtful, a joy bringer. Blessings in return… Beryl
Hamilton Avatar
March 16, 2024 at 5:59 PM
Beryl this is a great the flow is perfect its a plane many long to be hugs Shadow
Edmonds  Avatar
March 16, 2024 at 6:18 PM
Thank you so much Shadow, truly appreciated. Hugs sent right back, Beryl
Fisher Avatar
March 16, 2024 at 4:22 PM
Love your poetic description on that longed for place. I think you hit all the high points, and where do we sign up.
Edmonds  Avatar
March 16, 2024 at 4:29 PM
Hi David, sending a huge thank you, you ask where do we sigh up, I believe we write it in stars, a good place for to start… Beryl
M  Avatar
March 16, 2024 at 2:18 PM
Belle ,Belle, Belle What a simply beautiful poem full of peace, kindness, unity and loveliness! A real feel good poem straight from your loving heart! Loved it!!! Debx
M  Avatar
March 16, 2024 at 4:18 PM
You seem like such a lovely sweet person Belle….l am glad my words made you feel good! Cuddles….Debx
Edmonds  Avatar
March 16, 2024 at 2:22 PM
Deb, thank you, so, so, so much, those words have made me feel good. Beryl xx
Allison Avatar
March 16, 2024 at 2:00 PM
oh if only the world could be like this Beryl, it is such scary times we live in now and there seems to be no end to the conflicts. hugs jan xx
Edmonds  Avatar
March 16, 2024 at 2:20 PM
Yes, wouldn’t it be loverly. Thanks Jan, hugs returned, Beryl xx
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