Get Your Premium Membership

Utopia

Treehouses, yurts, airstream trailers Ticket to utopia Velvet curtains, kaftans, capes Come with me Ladders, fire station pole, slides Promises promises Cushions, hammocks, vesper breezes Forget the thinking Music, sounds of nature, yodelling Sometimes yodelling... Mountain tops, goats on ledges, light snow fall Ski lifts, snow angels, apre ski Ticket to utopia Imagine imagining creativity

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 8/16/2023 11:12:00 AM
- Congratulations on your great win, D.D. ... a skillful and creative poem :) - hugs
Login to Reply
Da11y Avatar
Di11y Da11y
Date: 8/16/2023 11:13:00 AM
Thank you so much Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/14/2023 9:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A creative/fun write. I enjoyed reading it. When do the tickets go on sale??? Have a great day.............
Login to Reply
Da11y Avatar
Di11y Da11y
Date: 8/14/2023 12:00:00 PM
Haha I think it's a version of a Barbie Dream house in retrospect (I have just seen the film) :D
Date: 8/13/2023 2:41:00 PM
wow, a utopia of images and creativity. Wonderful.
Login to Reply
Da11y Avatar
Di11y Da11y
Date: 8/13/2023 2:59:00 PM
Thanks Andrea, just experimenting - I'm missing a few on the list though :)
Date: 8/10/2023 12:35:00 PM
What a wonderful world of sights, sounds and songs in your utopia, DD. Best wishes for the contest. Blessings!
Login to Reply
Da11y Avatar
Di11y Da11y
Date: 8/10/2023 12:54:00 PM
Thanks Sam - thought I'd try a different direction :)

Book: Reflection on the Important Things