Utopia

My mystical fairy exclaims~ there’s a place I know,
A dreamland of fantasy, exempt from human woe
Undisturbed by misery of tenebrous earthly throe
Where nightmares don’t exist, dreams come true
And moonlit dawns wallow as whispers of love woo
Blushing sun’s amber glow, scintillating cobalt blue.

She leads me on pathways paved in bricks of gold
Pointing to motifs of signs jeweled glamorously bold,
Evidence of affluence and prosperity citizens behold
Free from mortal worries, luxuriating life carefree
On lagoons and sandy beaches of paradisiacal sea
Where passions tango and romantic yearnings spree.

Lies are unheard in this land, truth is never blurred,
Vocabulary insists love is a precious, beloved word
As neither hate, nor bigotry, nor jealousies bemoan
For benevolence and compassion eminently atone
Offering misdeeds forgiveness as prayers seek solace
Sending imperfection to learn from sage of flawless.

Enticed by her charm, to elixir of ecstasy I’m drawn
Traversing unknown where no human has ever gone
In wonderland of opulence~ utopian, exotic, perfect,
Exuding eminence distinguished by esoteric intellect;
There, I’m awakened, hypnotized in kiss of goodbye
When despondent in illusion, my reality utters a sigh.

November 14, 2021
Placed 2nd: “U” Contest, New Poems Only Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Constance La France
Theme: Utopia
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Baker Avatar
November 30, 2021 at 2:33 PM
I want to go there, please? Congrats on a 2nd. Great poem. "There, I’m awakened, hypnotized in kiss of goodbye When despondent in illusion, my reality utters a sigh." Powerful close, Bill
Wolf Avatar
November 21, 2021 at 7:12 PM
You know what they say when it sounds or reads 'too good to be true?' They get insanely jealous of the person who could pen such a magical vision of Utopia... When they get over their huff, they too 'utter a sigh,' Vijay. Brilliant write! Vivid Visions, Gershon
Pandit Avatar
November 22, 2021 at 7:53 AM
Much appreciate your kind remarks, Gershon. Many thanks.
Koplin Avatar
November 20, 2021 at 7:42 AM
Very well done Vijay! Congratulations on your win!!
Pandit Avatar
November 22, 2021 at 7:52 AM
Thank you Mark--much appreciate.
Gentile Avatar
November 18, 2021 at 11:38 AM
Congrats on your very high placement Vijay! I thought this would do well !!
Pandit Avatar
November 19, 2021 at 6:32 AM
Thank you for your return visit Mike. Much appreciate, as always.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 18, 2021 at 8:07 AM
Once you’ve experienced Utopia, nothing can compare. We see hints all around but they are mixed with too many unpleasantries. Oh to wake up from the fairyland back to reality…a vicious bump of bumps and bruises. Love your wording and imagery. Elixir of ecstasy, Undisturbed by misery of tenebrous earthly throe, On lagoons and sandy beaches of paradisiacal sea…
Pandit Avatar
November 19, 2021 at 6:31 AM
That is so nice to hear, Kim. Much appreciate your detailed feedback. Many thanks for the kind remarks.
Y. Avatar
November 18, 2021 at 7:07 AM
WoW! Vijay, That sounds like what utopia is to me. You have penned such a well-written and engaging verse. I see congrats are already in order, congratulations on a well-deserved win. Well done my friend. Have a wonderful day.
Pandit Avatar
November 18, 2021 at 7:20 AM
So very kind of you my friend. Much appreciate, Alexis. Many thanks.
Horsman Avatar
November 17, 2021 at 6:05 PM
Another superb poem from your pen Vijay, congrats. Harry
Pandit Avatar
November 18, 2021 at 7:20 AM
Thank you Harry. Glad you stopped by.
Sands Avatar
November 17, 2021 at 5:21 AM
This is a beautiful place and I felt taken to it with your writing. Thank you . So well done Vijay. Congratulations!
Pandit Avatar
November 18, 2021 at 7:19 AM
Glad to hear that Heidi. Much appreciate as always. Many thanks.
La France Avatar
November 16, 2021 at 1:23 PM
Vijay, beautifully penned and congratulations on your Second Place win in my "U" Contest, New Poems ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Pandit Avatar
November 18, 2021 at 7:19 AM
Much appreciate Constance. Thank you for hosting contests.
Canerdy Avatar
November 16, 2021 at 7:17 AM
Vijay, a huge CONGRATULATIONS on your win with this magnificent piece! Janice
Pandit Avatar
November 18, 2021 at 7:18 AM
Thank you Janice. So very kind of you.
Trifiatis Avatar
November 16, 2021 at 4:53 AM
Outstanding writing! Congratulations.
Pandit Avatar
November 18, 2021 at 7:18 AM
Welcome back my friend. Many thanks.
Jayasankar Avatar
November 16, 2021 at 12:10 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win with this beautiful write in Dear Heart's contest Vijayji...God bless...~ Ani
Pandit Avatar
November 18, 2021 at 7:18 AM
Many thanks for your return visit. Always a joy to read your feedback.
Dietrich Avatar
November 15, 2021 at 1:31 PM
gorgeous poetry on utopia, Vijay. Congrats for your win.
Pandit Avatar
November 18, 2021 at 7:17 AM
Thank you Andrea. Much appreciate.
Alex Avatar
November 15, 2021 at 10:31 AM
Beautiful writing on Utopia. "Enticed by her charm, to elixir of ecstasy I’m drawn Traversing unknown where no human has ever gone" Beautiful. Congratulations!
Pandit Avatar
November 18, 2021 at 7:17 AM
Thank you Christuraj--glad you stopped by.
Rose  Avatar
November 15, 2021 at 6:31 AM
I am enticed by your charms Vijay, every word penned beautiful and etched in dreams, have a great day, keep penning, L(:
Pandit Avatar
November 18, 2021 at 7:16 AM
Thank you Vienna--much appreciate.
Cunningham Avatar
November 15, 2021 at 3:08 AM
What a heavenly place you take the reader Vijay, sadly reality kicks in and you realise it was but an illusion. Good luck in the contest and enjoy your week ahead. Tom
Pandit Avatar
November 15, 2021 at 5:25 AM
So true--reality kicks in soon enough. Much appreciate Tom, your kind remarks. Many thanks for your good wishes.
Jayasankar Avatar
November 15, 2021 at 1:03 AM
A perfect write on a perfect place - "Utopia"... that we all wish to be in... atleast in our dreams. Amazing choice of words as always, that flow well with the theme of the poem and beautiful rhymes Vijayji. "Exuding eminence distinguished by esoteric intellect"... loved the alliteration here. My fav line: "As neither hate, nor bigotry, nor jealosies bemoan". Best wishes in the contest.. ~ Ani
Pandit Avatar
November 15, 2021 at 5:23 AM
Glad you liked the poem, Ani. I value your opinion and the time you take to write a detailed feedback. Much appreciate as always. Many thanks.
Poet Avatar
November 14, 2021 at 7:51 PM
You picture a place without defects, Vijay. The rhyme is terrific. Excellently crafted with a selection of magnificent words. Dear friend, I wish you the best of luck in this contest. And I hope you're doing well.
Pandit Avatar
November 15, 2021 at 5:20 AM
Thank you my friend for your complimentary feedback. Always a pleasure to read your comments, Lasaad. Much appreciate your good wishes.
Nicole Avatar
November 14, 2021 at 5:43 PM
In wonderland of opulence~ utopian, exotic, perfect" I can see why she lead you to such a place. (Soft sigh) Yes, in dreams anything is possible. Keep floating in those magical moments. Reality can wait. :) This is beautiful in so many amazing ways. :) Brandy
Pandit Avatar
November 15, 2021 at 5:18 AM
Yes indeed! Reality can wait its turn to be disheartened in illusion. Always a joy to read you feedback my friend. Much appreciate as always. Many thanks, Brandy.
Puddifoot Avatar
November 14, 2021 at 11:34 AM
and i'm enticed by the charm of this.:) nice rhyming, should do well in the contest
Pandit Avatar
November 14, 2021 at 2:02 PM
Thank you Charlotte. Much appreciate your visit and comments.
Buhagiar Avatar
November 14, 2021 at 10:13 AM
You describe a place that has no fault. Great rhyme scheme. Very intelligently done plus wonderful choice of vocabulary. Best for a win.
Pandit Avatar
November 14, 2021 at 2:02 PM
Much appreciate your kind remarks, Victor. Many thanks, as always, for your visit and comments.
George Avatar
November 14, 2021 at 8:41 AM
What a wonderland of exotic beauty and unrivalled charm you have created. This exceeds all demarcations of beauty, an ordinary human being can coceive of..... a world devoid of all vices, where Love reigns with imperial majesty. Yet your feet are firmly planted on reality at the end. Wish you all the best in this contest dear friend.
Pandit Avatar
November 14, 2021 at 9:32 AM
I am so glad you highlighted that ending line my dear friend. Much appreciate, Valsa, you taking the time to write detailed feedback. Much freedom to write about the unfamiliar world as you have noted. Many thanks for your kind remarks.
Seeker Avatar
November 14, 2021 at 7:25 AM
I see you’ve connected with your spiritual heart, here now within! Beautiful write, Vijay!
Pandit Avatar
November 14, 2021 at 8:08 AM
Honored by your visit US. Glad you found parts of this poem exploring the spiritual world. I know your poems are devoted to spirituality and ultimate enlightenment of the soul. Much appreciate you stopping by. Many thanks.
Gentile Avatar
November 14, 2021 at 7:04 AM
But dreams do come true Vijay and should yours bear reality, what a world that would be! Your words are exquisite and truly evocative of Utopia! Good Luck !!
Pandit Avatar
November 14, 2021 at 8:05 AM
So very kind of you Mike. Reality is much less alluring so we humans dream. Much appreciate your visit and comments. Many thanks for your kind remarks.
Daniel Avatar
November 14, 2021 at 4:56 AM
A great place to imagine living life in, Vijay:) great description:)
Pandit Avatar
November 14, 2021 at 8:03 AM
Thank goodness for dreams and fantasies to color our lives. Much appreciate your visit and comments, Jo. Many thanks.
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