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Upside Down World

Backwards and jaded, living in a life so complicated. Forgive me for my attitude, but I’m lost in platitude as I see a poverty-stricken city drowning in severe debt… and yet- it's the children that won’t forget. We find money to build new sports arenas, when public schools are broke. Is this a joke? Upside down and inside out, I beg and plead when assuredness is in doubt. I break a fever when I see children thirst, and I know I haven’t even seen the worst. Bottom side up, above on the ground- With the loss of society, I sit and drown. Forgive me but I see protestors fighting for abortion- It’s complete contortion, these people stuck in distortion. Where are the fighters for saving a human life, while an innocent angel is under the knife? Side to side, I want to hide. I must confide in one more thing- I see veterans of war suffer in silence, all they see is killing and violence, and all they need is a warm blanket and comfy bed- somewhere to rest their heroic head. Really? No health insurance? All they need is reassurance, but get pushed aside instead. Backwards and jaded- Why are humans hated? upside down and inside out- We may all look different, but without a doubt, from love we were created. Upside Down World March 11, 2017

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Date: 4/10/2017 3:28:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Laura! :-)
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Date: 3/13/2017 9:21:00 PM
It truly is sad what constitutes todays priorities. You have pointed a finger at some of the more glaring problems we face. Great write, Laura! Makes you think. Congrats on your 2nd place win! Blessings, Kim
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Date: 3/13/2017 12:32:00 PM
Congratulations Laura so well done...
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Date: 3/13/2017 9:36:00 AM
Last stanza puts things back in focus. My favorite lines: "Side to side, / I want to hide. / I must confide in one more thing-" Worded nicely, Laura, with obvious insights that frustrate. Congrats on your win here; I enjoyed your POV.
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Date: 3/12/2017 11:51:00 PM
Congratulations, Laura,, well done Hugs ~*
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Date: 3/12/2017 7:08:00 PM
Congratulations Laura loo!! Very well done :) Hugggs. Deb
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Date: 3/12/2017 5:48:00 PM
Rhyme not preferred this time...but who can deny this is classic all time great poetry, you got me with your excellent rhymes Laura, great work, congrats on a shared 2nd place!
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Date: 3/11/2017 10:01:00 PM
Well done, Laura Loo. Good questions - what is a life worth? And how far will we go to live our lives as we want?
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