UPSIDE DOWN

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UPSIDE DOWN WORLD ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ in this strange world, where up is down and down is up, and all is turned around, we stumble, lost, through an endless maze seeking answers, with an upside-down daze

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/2/2025 2:26:00 AM

Ahhh!! Captivating work and art. I enjoyed reading it this morning. Sara K

Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 8/1/2025 5:50:00 PM

Great read! I liked it very much :-) Thanks for sharing lovely Sara! Have a nice day ~ AA

Bill Baker

Date: 8/1/2025 5:12:00 PM

I like the creative fin little poem, Sara. Thanks for sharing it with us. Bill

Joe Dimino

Date: 8/1/2025 4:59:00 PM

Love it? No matter how one reads or looks at this work -- it is right-side!! Very thoughtful and entertaining. We know nothing. Relying on mostly feelings. Right always feels good. As I often tell myself, if I have to go through mental gymnastics, to convince myself to do something...it is probably wrong.

Rowena Velasco

Date: 8/1/2025 3:34:00 PM

A wonderfully concise reflection on disorientation in a chaotic world. The imagery of stumbling through an "endless maze" captures the feeling so many of us share. There's an elegant simplicity in your lines. A timely and thought-provoking write.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 8/1/2025 4:34:00 PM

thank you for your beautifully flowing comments, Rowena. Even your comments feel poetic...filled with heart and soul. Thank you for visiting. Sending you hugs, Sara