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Upon the Night

The play of the night Upon which we speak Opens the evening with delight And create a positive spin She saves her heartache For the master of night Where the moonlight Penetrates the heart And allows the pain to depart Through sleeves of trains Of whistles and borrowers Of words, there are stars That elicit another realm Of dominance where she can’t Escape, but filters the heartache Into pieces of manageable Parts, where the night Opens into soft requiems And the moon delivers Its peace once again Russell Sivey

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Date: 11/17/2017 8:48:00 AM
A beautiful free verse piece Russell!:)) Great imagery overall my friend!Wishing you a very lovely weekend!God bless you always!:)) D.
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Date: 11/8/2017 2:00:00 PM
Heartbreaking write, it is deep and sometimes there is no escaping the filters, but it does heal.. takes time.. you expressed it poeticlaly in your own unique way..
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Date: 11/8/2017 8:56:00 AM
This is beautiful, Russell, I can see the glow of the moon in peace, I really enjoyed reading!!
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Date: 11/8/2017 6:30:00 AM
What a beautifully written poem Russell bringing the reader through the emotions and then such a great ending ! Thanks for sharing :)
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Date: 11/8/2017 5:58:00 AM
A deep discourse of emotions expressed in this poem--well done, Russell!
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