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Upon a Falling Star

It was on the eve of Christmas night I could only sit and gaze at the sky light The universe, thought I, is mysterious I guess it makes us as such I was alone and I did celebrate my loneliness with scotch Tears did come to my eyes Why, after all, I did think myself wise I had left the family nest Caring not to think that it was so precious That it was the only thing that did, to me, matter much! Why, thought I upon a falling star I wish to travel back in time Say, star, so glittery, could you help me ease my inner war? I then closed my eyes and opened them to a new scene I was yet seven, it was Christmas and I was still the family's queen! Everyone did surround me, as I woke up and rushed to the magical tree Mom, dad, grand mom, cousins, even uncles and aunties Why, my joy and well being was the only thing that mattered Being a little queen, I must say, had well catered My laughter was the only thing that wanted my whole family! A home it was, with warmth and solace Cosy and enjoyable, oh how I wish for that lost time A time when the departed was still among us A time when I was so loved as to be pampered for the sake of a whole fuss A time I wish to go back to, tonight, as I do sit and drink my scotch! Placed 3rd in the Contest Christmas Past Present and Future Sponsored By : Kelly Deschler

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Date: 2/16/2015 1:15:00 AM
A.G., Congratulations in Kelly D's contest. Always ~LINDA
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Date: 2/15/2015 10:14:00 PM
Anoucheka, :) CONGRATS on your awesome placement ~ SKAT ~
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Date: 2/7/2015 3:00:00 PM
Dropping back again with my congrats :-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/7/2015 2:59:00 PM
I remember your great poem from my "Christmas" contest and it was good to see it once again. Congrats on the win and thank you for participating!
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Date: 1/11/2015 10:07:00 PM
Nice win...PD
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Date: 1/10/2015 11:35:00 AM
Anoucheka, congratulations on an excellent well-written winning piece! Best wishes. Pandita
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Date: 1/9/2015 6:52:00 PM
People say that we should forget the past and never look back. But, I don't agree with that. Sometimes our good memories are all that we have... A very expressive write here. Great work! Congrats on the win!
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Anoucheka Gangabissoon
Date: 1/10/2015 10:53:00 AM
Thks :) Always a pleasure to be appreciated for what I did create!
Date: 1/9/2015 6:13:00 PM
I found this heartbreakingly sad so full of longing and loneliness - great descriptive write - many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Anoucheka Gangabissoon
Date: 1/10/2015 10:53:00 AM
Thks :)
Date: 12/29/2014 10:28:00 AM
A lovely poem, Anoucheka. There is a certain strength that can be found from within loneliness. :) john.
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Anoucheka Gangabissoon
Date: 12/29/2014 10:47:00 AM
Thks so much for being appreciative :)

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