Upon a Falling Star

It was on the eve of Christmas night
I could only sit and gaze at the sky light
The universe, thought I, is mysterious
I guess it makes us as such
I was alone and I did celebrate my loneliness with scotch

Tears did come to my eyes
Why, after all, I did think myself wise
I had left the family nest
Caring not to think that it was so precious
That it was the only thing that did, to me, matter much!

Why, thought I upon a falling star
I wish to travel back in time
Say, star, so glittery, could you help me ease my inner war?
I then closed my eyes and opened them to a new scene
I was yet seven, it was Christmas and I was still the family's queen!

Everyone did surround me, as I woke up and rushed to the magical tree
Mom, dad, grand mom, cousins, even uncles and aunties
Why, my joy and well being was the only thing that mattered
Being a little queen, I must say, had well catered
My laughter was the only thing that wanted my whole family!

A home it was, with warmth and solace
Cosy and enjoyable, oh how I wish for that lost time
A time when the departed was still among us
A time when I was so loved as to be pampered for the sake of a whole fuss
A time I wish to go back to, tonight, as I do sit and drink my scotch!

Placed 3rd in the Contest 
Christmas Past Present and Future
Sponsored By : Kelly Deschler
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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February 16, 2015 at 1:15 AM
A.G., Congratulations in Kelly D's contest. Always ~LINDA
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February 15, 2015 at 10:14 PM
Anoucheka, :) CONGRATS on your awesome placement ~ SKAT ~
Allison Avatar
February 7, 2015 at 3:00 PM
Dropping back again with my congrats :-) hugs Jan xx
Deschler Avatar
February 7, 2015 at 2:59 PM
I remember your great poem from my "Christmas" contest and it was good to see it once again. Congrats on the win and thank you for participating!
A   Avatar
January 11, 2015 at 10:07 PM
Nice win...PD
Sietesantos Avatar
January 10, 2015 at 11:35 AM
Anoucheka, congratulations on an excellent well-written winning piece! Best wishes. Pandita
Deschler Avatar
January 9, 2015 at 6:52 PM
People say that we should forget the past and never look back. But, I don't agree with that. Sometimes our good memories are all that we have... A very expressive write here. Great work! Congrats on the win!
Gangabissoon Avatar
January 10, 2015 at 10:53 AM
Thks :) Always a pleasure to be appreciated for what I did create!
Allison Avatar
January 9, 2015 at 6:13 PM
I found this heartbreakingly sad so full of longing and loneliness - great descriptive write - many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Gangabissoon Avatar
January 10, 2015 at 10:53 AM
Thks :)
Fleming Avatar
December 29, 2014 at 10:28 AM
A lovely poem, Anoucheka. There is a certain strength that can be found from within loneliness. :) john.
Gangabissoon Avatar
December 29, 2014 at 10:47 AM
Thks so much for being appreciative :)
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