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Uplifting Sun

My mood follows sun Rising in the morning sky Smiles of golden hues shining Over black mountains I'm lifted with birds flying Above snow, waiting to melt Heidi Sands 2/12/23

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 2/12/2023 6:04:00 PM

Me, too. The Sun is the ultimate 'Lifter-Upper!' :) gershon

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/12/2023 6:47:00 PM

Yes it is. Thank Gershon. I hope all is well :)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 2/12/2023 10:58:00 AM

I enjoyed your "Uplifting Sun" write. Have a blessed day writing away.....................

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/12/2023 11:28:00 AM

I am happy you enjoyed it. I appreciate your kind comments. Thank you :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 2/12/2023 5:58:00 AM

Golden hues rising--always a delightful sight. Beautiful, uplifting poem, Heidi.

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/12/2023 6:44:00 AM

It was absolutely beautiful. Thank you Vijay. It is nice to see your comments :)

Sotto Poet

Date: 2/12/2023 4:57:00 AM

You crafted a great poem, Heidi. Your mood is spilling over with vitality, and the imagery you use is of the highest caliber.

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/12/2023 5:00:00 AM

Thank you very much Sotto :)

Joanna Daniel

Date: 2/12/2023 4:44:00 AM

Perfect mood to write:)

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/12/2023 5:00:00 AM

Thank you Jo . I hope you have a nice day :)