Peter Dome Poet Free verse

Up On the Roof

UP THE LADDER
UP THE ROOF
UP CAME A CROW
UP CAME A POOP
UP CAME MY FIST
UP CAME A SHOUT
UP CAME A TILE
UP I SLIPPED
UP ON A POST
UP CAME A SORE 
UP CAME THE AMBULANCE
UP THE HOSPITAL
UP WENT THE NEEDLE 
UP WENT A ROAR.




Peter Dome .copyright.2015. Dec.

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Alexis Y. December 1, 2015 at 11:42 AM Lol ! You had quite an eventfulday. Excellent imagery. The word play was cleaver . Good job:-) Alexis Peter Dome December 2, 2015 at 3:27 AM Hi Alexis my friend thank you so much for our kind comments, much appreciated. If you like tis one, take a look at the one about up a tree, think it's on page 2 now Glad yiu enjoyed it take good care. best wishes. Pete.

Mockingbird Stevenson November 30, 2015 at 10:07 PM oh bugger! lol Peter Dome December 2, 2015 at 3:28 AM thank you. glad you enjoyed it.My best wishes. Pete.