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Up On the Roof

UP THE LADDER UP THE ROOF UP CAME A CROW UP CAME A POOP UP CAME MY FIST UP CAME A SHOUT UP CAME A TILE UP I SLIPPED UP ON A POST UP CAME A SORE UP CAME THE AMBULANCE UP THE HOSPITAL UP WENT THE NEEDLE UP WENT A ROAR. Peter Dome .copyright.2015. Dec.

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Alexis Y.

Date: 12/1/2015 11:42:00 AM

Lol ! You had quite an eventfulday. Excellent imagery. The word play was cleaver . Good job:-) Alexis

Peter Dome
Date: 12/2/2015 3:27:00 AM

Hi Alexis my friend thank you so much for our kind comments, much appreciated. If you like tis one, take a look at the one about up a tree, think it's on page 2 now Glad yiu enjoyed it take good care. best wishes. Pete.

Mockingbird Stevenson

Date: 11/30/2015 10:07:00 PM

oh bugger! lol

Peter Dome
Date: 12/2/2015 3:28:00 AM

thank you. glad you enjoyed it.My best wishes. Pete.