Silent One Poet Free verse

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Unwritten Ink

There you were - dancing,
unaware of the intense rain.
Despite grey clouds grimacing,
your radiant glamour enticed emotions.

Emeralds and sapphires shimmered
through those luminous eyes.
First glimpse of your warm smile,
saw suppressed symphonies resonate 
with each beat of my heart.  

Not all poetry is for everyone's eyes,
so we read each other in silence.
Unwritten ink dyed our skin,
as the pen lost control,
carving our names within
timeless beloved ballads.
Two souls scribbling secret sonnets, 
easing restless chambers of our minds.

Naturally beautiful like nature,
our evergreen love blossomed.
As we wandered within utopia's oasis,
our feet kissed sun blessed paths,
leading to passionate pastures.

There is no transcript,
to our epic love story,
it will forever remain an
unpublished manuscript.

Simple Musing
Silent One
11 September 2018

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Janis Medders Tobechi May 2, 2020 at 10:32 PM I simply adore this and am carried away by the last verse. So real yet so figurative.

Vladislav Raven October 25, 2018 at 11:17 AM Hi Silent, another excellent write from your pen. You ever sing such wonderful songs in the free verse form. You know the way to use this form to its best, creating such emotional gems. Your poetry has such massive scope. This is such a beautiful write. Another fave. Have a wonderful Thursday. Your friend always....Mike.

James Inman October 10, 2018 at 7:44 AM Love this Silent One. Your middle stanza is especially beautiful. Also like the layout.

Freddie Robinson Jr. September 26, 2018 at 9:54 AM Romantically beautiful poem in heart-shaped pen form, SO. Great poem w/gorgeous lines ... Not all poetry is for everyone's eyes, so we read each other in silence. Unwritten ink dyed our skin, as the pen lost control, carving our names within. Pure poetry. Love and peace. Freddie Robinson Jr. September 26, 2018 at 9:56 AM Btw ... I'm doing fine. Annual American football season has begun, less PSoup time for me, that's all, bruh. Love and smiles always.

Punnia Viswan Bhatia September 21, 2018 at 6:41 AM lovely....

M. L. Kiser September 20, 2018 at 5:30 PM Wow, beautiful, romantic, smooth flowing.

Daniel Moscovitz September 20, 2018 at 9:37 AM An unpublished love epic that will only be printed in your hearts for all eternity!

Darlene De Beaulieu September 19, 2018 at 2:56 PM Hello Silent one you are right not all poetry is for everyone. Just the same.. I enjoyed your poetry. Have a nice day my friend.

Anisha Dutta September 19, 2018 at 11:39 AM Whichever you compose turns a masterpiece. Blessing n Best wishes.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart September 19, 2018 at 7:46 AM There is no love like a Poet's love <3 Congratulations on POTW my friend! xomo

Don Pettinelli September 19, 2018 at 6:22 AM When I read this poem this morning I told myself to place your poems at the top of my reading list. Your poem also opened my heart to someone who was special in my life. Thank you for this awesome love poem.

Kim Rodrigues September 19, 2018 at 4:43 AM Great! Loved the lines: Not all poetry is for everyone's eyes, so we read each other in silence. Congrats on POTD! Silent One September 19, 2018 at 5:12 AM Thank you Kim..

Linda Milgate September 18, 2018 at 11:55 AM What a lovely poem and wonderful to hear such love written so beautifully. Thank you for this moment of beauty. Silent One September 19, 2018 at 5:12 AM Thank you Linda..

Lisa Ricci September 18, 2018 at 11:35 AM Good Afternoon Silent. Congratulations on your entry being chosen POTW. The entry and your execution are very deserving. I especially enjoyed your third stanza and opening lines of that stanza. Well done. May this day find your well. Silent One September 19, 2018 at 5:13 AM Thank you for your visit and wonderful feedback Lisa..

Constance La France September 17, 2018 at 10:34 PM Silent, congratulations w poem of the week with this beautifully penned write, well done Silent One September 19, 2018 at 5:13 AM Thank you Constance..

Vijay Pandit September 17, 2018 at 6:04 PM Excellent in every way Silent One..I especially enjoyed reading the third and the final stanzas..a FAVE..well deserved poem of the day. Silent One September 19, 2018 at 5:14 AM Thank you Vijay... A lot of people like the third stanza, it is my favourite also..

Connie Marcum Wong September 17, 2018 at 12:41 AM As you know I loved this poem enough to fave it Silent. I am very happy to see it honored with POTW! Congratulations my friend. Very deserving! : ) Silent One September 19, 2018 at 5:15 AM That is a great compliment Connie, thank you once again..

Nette Onclaud September 16, 2018 at 2:04 PM this gracious poem reminds me to seek love in between those numb days, S.O... a treasure of a POTD it is...huggs Silent One September 19, 2018 at 5:16 AM Thank you Nette..

Sylvia Coulstock September 16, 2018 at 11:27 AM Absolutely beautiful,a really stunning piece. You may be Silent One but your poetry speaks volumes. Congratulations on POTW,well deserved.I love it and would like it for a favourite.Thank you. June. Silent One September 19, 2018 at 5:17 AM Thank you Sylvia..

Tom Cunningham September 16, 2018 at 7:09 AM Back with congrats S.O. On POTW. Tom.

Robert Lindley September 16, 2018 at 6:55 AM Just found this is POTW my friend. A deep and truly exceptional expression of love. life and romance! Each verse a golden step in a great dance of poetic brilliance and insight! You have the true heart and soul of a great poet! A fav.. a shining jewel.

Maria Williams September 16, 2018 at 6:06 AM Congratulations on your POTW Si, a great choice on this wonderful poem of yours....Maria hugs

Mansi Sharma September 15, 2018 at 5:21 AM So lovely! Your romantic compositions are always a treat! :)

Joseph P. DiMino September 14, 2018 at 10:14 AM Love this work, Si; very beautiful throughout! "Not all poetry is for everyone's eyes, so we read each other in silence"--Fantastic!

Joanna Daniel September 14, 2018 at 9:00 AM Lovely poem with pictures of longing, SO:)

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