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My breath catches With but a moment of your gaze Your eyes are like mine Oh darker, certainly, and a bit larger But they see what mine do, react to light the same way Move and study, blink and bat, stare and sparkle They are incredible eyes, full of bright and life I wish I could tell you ... I wish I knew enough of your language To convey what is in my heart The most basic of feelings That you are precious, beautiful, a creation of wonder That I find you ever as much of a human being That these others who ignore you The ones who pass you on the street as if you are phantom And hush you into the shadowed corners of society Are the ones whose character I question For it is the very FIRST rule of humanity That we treat all others the same as we would be treated So please do not bow your head or cower Do not hide in the dim reaches Be proud of the unique, exquisite person you are Made of stardust and complexity Created with precision and immaculate intent To breathe and walk and dream To touch and be touched To be appreciated and loved As my eyes are loving you ... now. ~ 2nd Place ~ in the "Strand Choice 4 Any Form Any Theme" Poetry Contest, Brian Strand, Judge & Sponsor.

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Date: 1/24/2020 3:14:00 PM
Bard, A hearty amen to granting dignity to all humans. Another sumptuous write with your usual plethora of succulent words and phrases (my favorite: "Made of stardust and complexity / Created with precision and immaculate intent". As always, your words track perfectly with your selected image. Another feast for the heart, my friend. Congrats on your placement ~ John
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 1/30/2020 10:56:00 PM
This is such a wonderful, heartfelt comment, John, and it means a great deal to me - thank you so much, my friend - blessings! :o)
Date: 1/24/2020 1:05:00 PM
Wonderful write, Greg:-) Loved it! Heartiest congratulations on your win!
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Date: 7/31/2018 11:28:00 AM
Nice piece
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 7/31/2018 5:33:00 PM
Thank you, Joseph! :-) ~ The Bard
Date: 7/22/2018 8:55:00 AM
Hmmm, wonderful piece Greg. It's left a smile on my heart. xomo
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 7/23/2018 2:09:00 AM
Thank you so very much, Mo, now your comment has left a smile on mine! ;-) <3

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