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Thunder thighs Wonder eyes Chilly cries Lilly lies Broken dreams Floating steam Inside green Outside mean Holy talk Spirit walk Fearless squawk Tearless tall Shadows bleed Ballard sing Strangers unite Angels flight

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Date: 2/10/2024 7:11:00 PM
I'd call this: 'My Three-Syllable Footle." Reads and rhymes just like a footle, except each line is three syllables instead of two. Maybe invent it; call it a 'Threetle!' :) - Gershon
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Karen Jones
Date: 2/10/2024 7:18:00 PM
lol thanks Gershon
Date: 2/8/2024 9:11:00 PM
So many thought that perked my interest. I particularly liked the Angel's flight.
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Karen Jones
Date: 2/9/2024 12:17:00 AM
Thanks Hilda was a bit of a freewrite

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