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He whispered in my ear
So softly
His words sang a melody in my body
That made me quiver
It felt good
His hands gently massaging
My brown skin
Sending tickling sensations
Up and down my spine
Feeling soft blows
On my frontal lobe
He kisses me
My love begins to rain
I bleed impatient desire
He quickly fills me
And applies pressure
My heart beats faster
And faster
The pounding of his heart
Equivalent to his pounding thrusts
I feel the excitement building
The adrenaline rushing
He lets out a signal of release
I let out a sigh of relief
We stare deeply into each others eyes
And in a polite manner
I ask him, “What’s your name?”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Ludden Avatar
June 13, 2014 at 10:45 AM
Wonderful! Erotica with a message! I'm hooked.
Street Avatar
June 12, 2014 at 6:25 PM
Joey, And Welcome To Her PoeSoup ~ Dig The Verse You Go Girl! KLove *
Mitchell Avatar
June 13, 2014 at 10:15 AM
Thanks!
Fraser Avatar
June 11, 2014 at 11:52 PM
This piece sizzles with passion Latosha, you paint a very vivid picture for the imagination of your readers. Very well done, Oh by the way the names Carl, lol Blessings, Carl
Mitchell Avatar
June 13, 2014 at 10:15 AM
Thank you Carl! Appreciate it.
Sergi Avatar
June 10, 2014 at 3:17 PM
A very moving work, no pun intended. Nice write Lotosha!
Mitchell Avatar
June 13, 2014 at 10:14 AM
Thank you!
Street Avatar
June 12, 2014 at 6:29 PM
Hey lame it's not Lotosha ?
Ink-U-Script Avatar
June 9, 2014 at 1:24 PM
:) ...This is a lovely lovely write. ..I see that you're no beginner in writing. ..A gifted pen you hold my friend. I'll be waiting for more.
Mitchell Avatar
June 9, 2014 at 1:29 PM
Certainly not! Thanks! I will keep you updated.
Andresen Avatar
June 9, 2014 at 1:00 PM
- A summer romance :) ..... a sweet & lovely poem, Latosha! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Mitchell Avatar
June 9, 2014 at 1:27 PM
Thanks Anne-Lise!
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