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I know the pain you are feeling my friend, this a sorrow that I have felt; through this sad time on me you can depend, in my strong arms you can just melt. It will be fine, and love will twine. Again in time, sweet joy will climb. I will be here my friend- until you mend. __________________________ July 19, 2018 Poetry/Rhyme/Until You Mend Copyright Protected, ID 18-1044361-01 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, Nine Lines To Let Them Know Everything Will Be Fine sponsor, Silent One Third Place

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Date: 9/10/2018 1:57:00 PM
Constance, your caring, compassionate feelings are so evident in this poem. You are an extraordinary example of true friendship. Congrats on your placement.
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Date: 9/10/2018 8:37:00 AM
Great poem of comfort Constance. Congrats on your win...Charlie
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Date: 9/10/2018 7:09:00 AM
We all need true friends.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 7/20/2018 9:34:00 AM
Empathy runs deep, Broken Wings, in your reassurance to a heartbroken friend.. a great take on the contest theme, your write is stirring, heartfelt and beautifully expressed. Best wishes for a win.. ~Susan
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